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JIMMY
WATSON
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Comes face to face
with the Loch Ness monster. "It cannot be."
JIMMY
WATSON AND THE LOCH NESS MONSTER V2.0
CLEANER OCEAN FOUNDATION LTD.
6 part TV series Copyright © 18 April 2026 All rights reserved.
EPISODE 1 — “THE ROAD TO THE HIGHLANDS”
Logline: Jimmy Watson secretly smuggles his AI Dinobot onto the family VW Kombi as they drive from Sussex to the Scottish Highlands — unaware that something ancient is already stirring beneath Loch
Ness, but Anthony has picked up a confusing signal.
Key Beats:
- Jimmy activates Anthony’s “Luggage Mode” and hides him on the Kombi
roof
- The family begins their winter road trip north.
- Anthony’s cloaking nearly fails on the M1, causing a trucker to report a “ghost.”
- The M90 blizzard reveals Anthony’s thermal shielding as snow melts in perfect circles.
- Arrival at Rhona MacLeod’s cottage — a mix of warmth, mystery, and scientific intrigue.
- First hints of Rhona’s obsession with Loch Ness.
- Night falls… and Anthony detects the Ancient Heartbeat for the first time.
Episode Theme: The journey begins — secrets, family, and the first whisper of the impossible.
SCENE
1 - THE
ROAD TO THE HIGHLANDS - THE ROOF RACK RIDDLE
FADE
IN:
EXT. HERSTMONCEUX VILLAGE – NIGHT
A crisp winter night. The air glitters with frost. The Sussex
Downs rise like sleeping giants beneath a sky of polished stars.
A faint glow spills from a garden workshop behind the Watson home.
INT. GARDEN WORKSHOP – CONTINUOUS
Tools hang neatly on the walls. Strange blueprints and half-finished
gadgets clutter the benches.
JIMMY
WATSON, 12, bright-eyed and determined, whispers conspiratorially to a
towering robotic creature beside him.
JIMMY
(whispering, breath fogging)
Now remember the rules, Anthony. Mum said this is a family holiday. No
projects, no coding… and definitely no giant robotic Australian Bulldog
Ants.
ANTHONY,
the AI Dinobot — iridescent blue-black armour, multifaceted amber eyes —
tilts his head thoughtfully. His voice hums like a cello made of electricity.
ANTHONY
Observation: I am a member of the family, Jimmy. My database defines
“family” as a social unit living together. Also, my sensors indicate Scotland
contains 31,460 freshwater lochs. Probability of needing a Dinobot for
aquatic exploration: 98.4%.
Jimmy grins, patting Anthony’s metallic thorax.
JIMMY
I knew you’d say that. But you’ve got to be a stowaway. Dormant Cargo
protocol. Can you do it?
ANTHONY
Initiating “Luggage Mode.”
A series of elegant whirs, clicks, and mechanical folds. Anthony collapses
in on himself like a transforming puzzle box — legs tucking, mandibles
retracting, abdomen compressing — until he becomes a sleek, rectangular
block of advanced tech.
Jimmy strains to lift him — but Anthony subtly activates internal grav-levelers,
becoming light as a suitcase.
EXT. WATSON DRIVEWAY – MOMENTS LATER
The Volkswagen
Kombi camper van, light and dark blue two-tone, sits under a sheen of
frost.
Jimmy hauls Anthony onto the roof rack, aided by a discreet burst from
Anthony’s hidden thrusters.
JIMMY
Perfect. Now… cloaking on.
A ripple passes over Anthony — like moonlight bending. He vanishes into
a shimmering distortion.
Jimmy throws a heavy frost-proof tarp over the “empty” space and ties
it down with sailor-worthy knots.
JIMMY
Hold that position. And keep your heaters low. No turning into a giant ice
cube.
A tiny, muffled voice from beneath the tarp:
ANTHONY (O.S.)
Scanning… Temperature regulated. Stealth maintained. I shall remain as
silent as a Scottish moss-grown stone.
Jimmy smiles, satisfied.
FADE TO:
EXT. WATSON HOUSE – DAWN
The world is white with hoarfrost. Sunlight glitters across the village.
TIM
WATSON, cheerful and slightly chaotic, does a proud Dad-Dance around
the Kombi, checking tyres and oil
with exaggerated seriousness.
TIM
Tires good… oil’s golden.
Right then! Let’s get this show on the road!
MARION
WATSON emerges, wrapped in a scarf long enough to tow a tractor. She
eyes the bulky tarp on the roof rack.
MARION
That’s a lot of gear, Jimmy. I thought we agreed on light packing?
Jimmy freezes. A bead of sweat forms despite the cold.
JIMMY
It’s… mostly blankets. And, um… heavy-duty tarps. In case it rains.
Marion softens, ruffling his hair.
MARION
You’re a thoughtful lad. And what’s got you grinning like a Cheshire
cat?
Jimmy shrugs, trying to look innocent.
JIMMY
Just excited to see Cousin Rhona. I’ve got a feeling this trip’s going
to be unforgettable.
TIM
Too right! Destination: Drumnadrochit! Loch Ness, here we come!
Tim slides the Kombi’s
side door shut with a satisfying THUNK.
INT. KOMBI CAMPER VAN – CONTINUOUS
The engine sputters, coughs, then bursts into a friendly pop-pop-VROOM.
Jimmy glances upward. He can’t see Anthony — but he feels a faint
vibration through the chassis. A secret heartbeat.
EXT. HERSTMONCEUX
– CONTINUOUS
The Kombi rolls down the frosty lane, exhaust puffing like a dragon
waking from sleep.
Above, hidden beneath tarp and cloaking field, Anthony rides silently —
the first piece of a mystery that will follow them all the way to the
Highlands.
FADE OUT.
TITLE CARD:
THE ROAD TO THE HIGHLANDS – THE ROOF RACK RIDDLE
SCENE
2 - THE M1 MIRAGE
FADE
IN:
EXT. M1 MOTORWAY – DAY
A salt-crusted ribbon of tarmac stretches north through a landscape dusted
with snow. The sky is pale, the air shimmering with icy gusts.
A bright blue-and-white Volkswagen
Kombi
camper van hums along the motorway, its roof rack covered by a heavy
yellow-tarped bundle.
INT. KOMBI CAMPER VAN – CONTINUOUS
Inside, it’s cozy. The scent of peppermint tea mingles with the soft
mechanical hum of the engine.
TIM
WATSON, cheerful and rugged, grips the wheel with practiced ease.
TIM
Next stop, Edinburgh! Thank heavens for this heater, eh? Look at that
slush out there. It’s a proper winter wonderland, and we’re sitting in
here like three peas in a very warm pod.
MARION
WATSON, wrapped in a knitted scarf, smiles from the galley kitchen.
She pours hot water
into a teapot.
JIMMY
WATSON, 12, watches the snowy world blur past. He’s curled in a
blanket, eyes flicking to the wing mirror.
EXT. KOMBI ROOF – CONTINUOUS
Beneath the tarp, ANTHONY, the Magic
Dinobot, is curled into a compact hexapod form. His titanium and carbon-fibre
body hums faintly. His camouflage flickers — a shimmering distortion in
the air.
A sudden gust of wind lashes across the motorway. The tarp flaps
violently, ropes straining.
For a split second, the canvas lifts.
INT. EIGHTEEN-WHEELER CAB – SAME TIME
BIG BILL, a burly trucker with a weathered face, squints through his
windshield.
He sees… a hole in reality.
A shimmering patch of sky, folded and tucked onto the Kombi’s roof. Then
— the tarp snaps back down, smoothed by invisible hands.
Bill’s eyes widen. He slams the brakes.
BIG BILL
By the stars...
He grabs his radio handset.
BIG BILL (CONT'D)
Motorway Police, come in. This is Haulier 4-9. I’ve just seen a... a
shifting ghost. On the roof of a blue and white Kombi. It adjusted its own
blankets, it did!
INT. MOTORWAY POLICE STATION – MOMENTS LATER
A young POLICE CONSTABLE listens, bewildered. He turns to his SERGEANT,
holding the phone away from his ear.
CONSTABLE
Sarge, we’ve got another one. Says a ghost is tucking itself into bed on
top of a camper van near Leeds.
SERGEANT
Tell him ghosts don’t exist, and tarpaulins don’t have hands. Tell him
to pull over, get a strong coffee, and have a long lie-down. Honestly, the
things people see when it starts to snow...
INT. KOMBI CAMPER VAN – CONTINUOUS
Jimmy watches the truck slow down, peeling off toward a motorway diner.
His heart thuds.
JIMMY (V.O.)
Oh no. Anthony’s been spotted.
He exhales slowly, fingers uncurling. His stomach growls.
FLASHBACK – EXT. CORNWALL COAST – MORNING
A memory flickers: Jimmy at a seaside café, golden eggs and sizzling
bacon on a plate. His mum surfing the Atlantic
waves.
BACK TO PRESENT – INT. KOMBI CAMPER VAN
Marion watches Jimmy with knowing eyes.
MARION
Anyone like a cup of tea? And I’ve got some digestive biscuits. It’s a
long way to the border.
JIMMY
Oh, yes please, Mum.
Tim nods, eyes on the road.
TIM
Tea and biscuits. Perfection. We’ll be in Scotland before the sun goes
down.
EXT. KOMBI ROOF – CONTINUOUS
Beneath the tarp, Anthony sends a tiny encrypted pulse to Jimmy’s phone.
On screen: A single emoji: a snowflake, ❄️, followed by a thumbs-up.
The secret is still safe. Even if it’s a very chilly secret.
FADE OUT.
TITLE CARD:
THE ROAD TO THE HIGHLANDS – THE M1 MIRAGE
SCENE
3 - HEATER
& HUMMING, M90 BLIZZARD
EXT.
M90 – SCOTTISH HIGHLANDS – DAY
A white void swallows the motorway. Snow whirls in frantic spirals, thick
enough to erase the world.
Through the blizzard, a two-tone blue VW Kombi — MISS OCEAN — crawls
forward, its headlights glowing like enchanted lanterns.
INT. MISS OCEAN – CONTINUOUS
The cabin glows warm and sapphire-blue,
a stark contrast to the storm outside.
The engine hums — deep, confident, almost alive — echoing faintly like
a creature purring in its sleep.
TIM (40s, practical, kind-eyed) leans forward, squinting through the
windscreen.
TIM
(softly)
That’s strange…
He glances up. The roof lining glows orange from the new heater — but
patches of snow above it melt in perfect circles, as if touched by
invisible fingertips.
TIM
Marion, look at the roof. The snow’s melting in little… circles.
(beat)
And do you hear that? Like a hive of very polite bees hitching a ride.
MARION (40s, sharp, warm, perpetually worried) grips the dashboard.
MARION
Never mind the bees
and the circles, Tim! I can’t see the spare wheel in front. Are you sure
you can?
In the back seat, JIMMY (12, bright, curious) sits between the sliding
doors, eyes darting between the storm and the roof.
He hears the humming too — low, resonant, almost magical.
Jimmy peers through the windscreen. The snow curves away from the glass,
as if brushed aside by an unseen hand.
JIMMY (V.O.)
Aerodynamics… or is Anthony projecting a thermal shield?
JIMMY
Are we there yet?
Tim and Marion exchange a look in the rearview mirror — a tired but
affectionate smile.
For a moment, the storm fades, and they’re young again, driving through
Devon rain.
Tim squeezes Marion’s hand.
TIM
Just like old times.
EXT. M90 – CONTINUOUS
CRUNCH.
A wall of red light explodes ahead — the LED
tail-lights of a massive articulated truck.
INT. MISS OCEAN – CONTINUOUS
TIM
Whoa!
Tim slams the brakes.
The Kombi shudders, tyres clawing at the slush.
The van skids — then steadies — stopping inches from the truck’s
bumper.
Tim hits the hazard lights. Red pulses flash through the storm.
He exhales shakily.
TIM
Thank heavens for those new brakes. And those wider tyres you insisted on,
Marion.
MARION
Good job, Miss
Ocean.
She pats the dashboard like one might pat a loyal hippogriff.
EXT. MISS OCEAN – ROOF – SAME MOMENT
The sudden stop sends the invisible cargo — something long, metallic,
and faintly shimmering — sliding forward under its ropes.
A faint electronic chitter escapes into the storm.
INT. MISS OCEAN – CONTINUOUS
Jimmy winces. A tiny synthesized voice echoes in his mind — a telepathic
whisper through his watch.
ANTHONY (V.O.)
Warning. Deceleration exceeded comfort parameters.
Also, my mandibles are vibrating.
Please advise the pilot that I am not a sack of potatoes.
Jimmy stifles a laugh.
JIMMY
(whispering toward the roof)
You okay, Anthony?
MARION
(turning)
Did you say something, Jimmy?
JIMMY
Just talking to my tablet! Checking the GPS.
We’re nearly at Drumnadrochit!
The truck ahead lurches forward.
Miss Ocean follows, her paintwork now crusted with salt and ice — but
her spirit, and her secret passenger, undimmed.
Outside, the storm thins just enough to reveal a dark, endless stretch of water.
LOCH NESS.
Waiting.
Watching.
SCENE
4 - THE
DRUMNADROCHIT WELCOME
EXT.
HIGHLAND ROAD – DUSK
A fine, glittering mist drifts across the rugged hills. Snowflakes shimmer
like tiny spells as a two-tone blue van rattles up a gravel driveway
bordered by ancient, lichen-covered stone walls.
The headlights sweep across a storybook Highland cottage—whitewashed
stone, slate roof, and a chimney puffing warm peat smoke into the cold
air.
MARION
WATSON presses her face to the window, enchanted.
MARION
(softly, to herself)
It’s like something out of The Quiet Man… only colder. John
Wayne.
The van stops. Marion slides open the door and steps out into the biting
air.
EXT. RHONA MACLEOD’S COTTAGE – CONTINUOUS
RHONA
MACLEOD bursts out of the front door, wrapped in wool and joy.
MARION
Rhona, this is fabulous!
The cousins embrace in a flurry of scarves and laughter.
TIM climbs out of the driver’s side, still dazed by the scenery. He pats
the van affectionately.
TIM
Is the parking alright there, Rhona? Don’t want to block the lane.
RHONA
(laughing)
Perfect, General! Though I must say—surfing wagons aren’t common in a
Highland winter.
Marion blushes. JIMMY hops out, practically vibrating with excitement.
JIMMY
She’s historic! High-pressure oil pump and everything!
Rhona’s eyes sparkle.
RHONA
And all that gear on the roof—does it need to come in? Weather’s a
fickle beast.
JIMMY
(startled)
Oh—no! No, no. Very… specialized. Best left under the tarp.
Rhona raises an eyebrow but smiles.
RHONA
Well then. Come inside, all of you. Warm yourselves.
They follow her toward the cottage.
INT. RHONA’S COTTAGE – LIVING ROOM – MOMENTS LATER
The cozy crofter exterior gives way to a wizard-like laboratory: glowing
sonar screens, tangled cables, corkboards covered in grainy
black-and-white photos of mysterious shapes in water.
Jimmy’s jaw drops.
JIMMY
Wow… Miss MacLeod, what is all this?
Rhona’s expression softens, then dims.
RHONA
My life’s work, Jimmy.
Marion studies a photo of a dark, curved shape breaking the surface of a
loch.
MARION
Are these… what I think they are?
Rhona hesitates.
RHONA
Yes. Though the locals think I’m chasing ghosts. They say I’m just
feeding the legend.
Jimmy’s watch vibrates silently. He glances down.
INSERT – WATCH SCREEN:
SCANNING ENVIRONMENT. LOCATION STABLE. REQUEST: DISMOUNT. BARN WITH DRY
CARBON-BASED VEGETATION DETECTED. THERMAL MASKING IDEAL.
Jimmy taps quickly.
JIMMY (TEXTING)
STAY PUT, MAXIMUS. HIBERNATION MODE ONLY. COMPLIANCE?
A beat.
COMPLIANCE.
Jimmy exhales.
INT. RHONA’S COTTAGE – STAIRCASE / GUEST ROOMS – LATER
Rhona leads them up a narrow wooden staircase. The rooms are simple, warm,
and filled with the scent of dried lavender.
MARION
It’s beautiful, Rhona. Thank you.
RHONA
Dinner’s nearly ready. I hope no one objects to Haggis?
Jimmy freezes.
JIMMY
Is… is it a bird?
Marion laughs.
MARION
No, dear. More like a very large, spicy sausage.
JIMMY
If it’s food,
I’m in.
His stomach growls loudly. Everyone laughs.
INT. RHONA’S COTTAGE – DINING ROOM – NIGHT
A heavy oak table. A steaming Haggis sits proudly in the center,
surrounded by mountains of creamy mashed potatoes—tatties.
RHONA
I grew the potatoes myself, Jimmy. Hope you like them mashed.
JIMMY
Like them? I love them.
He piles tatties onto his plate.
RHONA
And school?
Marion says you’re quite the whiz.
MARION
Top in robotics.
Rhona’s eyes light up.
RHONA
Marvelous. Any projects on the go?
Jimmy hesitates.
JIMMY
Yes, cousin Rhona—
RHONA
(smiling)
Just Rhona. We’re family.
Jimmy beams, a little shy but clearly fond of her.
He takes a brave bite of Haggis. Everyone watches.
JIMMY
Mmm! It’s good! Really meaty! And the potato—so creamy!
Tim and Marion sigh with relief.
DINNER CONTINUES – LIGHT, WARM, MAGICAL
JIMMY
So… how do you pronounce the name of this place? The sign looked like a
secret code.
RHONA
(laughing)
It’s just as it’s written: Drum-na-drochit.
JIMMY
Drumanchit?
(tries again)
Drum-chint-nacht?
The table erupts in laughter—even Tim wipes tears from his eyes.
RHONA
Not bad! Try again.
JIMMY
Drum-na-drochit.
RHONA
Perfect.
A warm silence settles. Jimmy glances out the window toward the dark,
still Loch.
The wind whispers across the water.
Somewhere out there… something stirs.
And somewhere on the roof, hidden beneath a tarp, a mechanical giant waits
patiently for nightfall.
END SCENE
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SCENE
5 - THE DEBUNKER'S VENOM
SIX
PART SERIES OUTLINE:
EPISODE 1 — “THE ROAD TO THE HIGHLANDS”
Logline: Jimmy Watson secretly smuggles his AI Dinobot onto the family VW Kombi as they drive from Sussex to the Scottish Highlands — unaware that something ancient is already stirring beneath Loch
Ness, but Anthony has picked up a confusing signal.
Key Beats:
- Jimmy activates Anthony’s “Luggage Mode” and hides him on the Kombi roof.
- The family begins their winter road trip north.
- Anthony’s cloaking nearly fails on the M1, causing a trucker to report a “ghost.”
- The M90 blizzard reveals Anthony’s thermal shielding as snow melts in perfect circles.
- Arrival at Rhona MacLeod’s cottage — a mix of warmth, mystery, and scientific intrigue.
- First hints of Rhona’s obsession with Loch Ness.
- Night falls… and Anthony detects the Ancient Heartbeat for the first time.
Episode Theme: The journey begins — secrets, family, and the first whisper of the impossible.
EPISODE 2 — “THE DRUMNADROCHIT WELCOME”
Logline: As the Watsons settle into Highland life, tensions rise in the village pub — and Anthony’s midnight scan reveals that the Loch is not as quiet as it seems.
Key Beats:
- Warm, comedic arrival at Rhona’s cottage.
- The Kelpie’s Bridle pub confrontation with Angus Campbell.
- Hamish MacGregor introduced as a gruff but good‑hearted ally.
- Solar Cola becomes a running motif for Jimmy’s energy and courage.
- That night, Anthony detects a massive freshwater lifeform responding to his signal.
- Jimmy nearly blows the secret when his watch vibrates violently.
- The Ancient Heartbeat “looks back” at Anthony.
Episode Theme: The Highlands welcome them — but not everyone is friendly.
EPISODE 3 — “THE STOWAWAY REVEALED”
Logline: When Marion discovers Anthony on the Kombi roof, the truth spills out — and Rhona realises Jimmy’s robot may be the key to proving her life’s work.
Key Beats:
- Marion discovers Anthony’s cloaked form and forces a confession.
- Anthony reveals himself politely (“Your slippers appear very efficient”).
- Rhona is stunned — Anthony’s sonar is more advanced than her entire lab.
- Jimmy admits Anthony detected a 30‑ton creature in the Loch.
- Rhona and Jimmy form a scientific alliance.
- Midnight expedition planned to Whispering Bay.
Episode Theme: Secrets unravel — and a new team forms.
EPISODE 4 — “THE IMPOSSIBLE GREETING”
Logline: Under the cover of mist, Jimmy, Rhona, and Anthony make first contact with the Loch Ness Monster — a lonely, intelligent survivor who trusts the robot more than humans.
Key Beats:
- Midnight convoy to Whispering Bay.
- Anthony sends harmonic pulses into the water.
- The mist swirls — and Nessie rises from the depths.
- Anthony and Nessie communicate in a duet of light and sound.
- Nessie reveals she is the last of her lineage, capable of parthenogenesis.
- Emotional moment: she allows Anthony to touch her snout.
- Tim finally believes.
Episode Theme: The legend becomes real — and heartbreakingly vulnerable.
EPISODE 5 — “THE UNSPOKEN PACT”
Logline: BBC journalist Charley Temple arrives to investigate Angus Campbell — but instead becomes an unexpected ally when she witnesses the truth and chooses to protect it.
Key Beats:
- Charley Temple introduced — sharp, curious, ethical.
- She interviews Rhona and the Watsons, sensing something hidden.
- Charley secretly follows Miss Ocean to the Loch at night.
- She witnesses Nessie and Anthony communicating.
- Rhona explains the danger of exposure.
- Charley makes a moral choice: She will protect the secret and discredit Angus instead.
- Meanwhile, Angus prepares illegal sonar disruptors and harpoons.
Episode Theme: Trust is earned — and the circle of protectors grows.
EPISODE 6 — “THE SHADOW ON THE LOCH”
Logline: Angus launches a dangerous night‑time hunt during a violent storm, forcing Jimmy, Anthony, and the family into a desperate rescue mission to save Nessie from discovery — or death.
Key Beats:
- Angus sets out with illegal equipment to “clear the Loch.”
- Nessie hides in a limestone cavern, terrified by the sonar assault.
- Hamish provides a wooden boat to avoid detection.
- Anthony becomes Nessie’s shield, projecting counter‑frequencies.
- The storm becomes a character — lightning, fog, roaring waves.
- Jimmy leads the rescue, proving his courage and leadership.
- Angus’s boat is disabled (non‑violently), and he is forced to retreat.
- Nessie escapes into the deep, safe but still alone.
- The Watsons, Rhona, Charley, and Hamish form an unspoken pact to protect her.
- Final shot: Miss Ocean driving away at dawn, the Loch calm…
…and a massive shadow gliding beneath the surface.
Episode Theme: Protecting the impossible — and keeping the world from destroying what it doesn’t understand.
WHY THIS 6‑EPISODE FORMAT WORKS (FOR THE PITCH DECK)
1. The Highlands as a character
The outline uses:
- Whispering Bay
- Drumnadrochit
- Mist‑shrouded lochs
- Forest tracks
- Storm‑torn waters
- Ancient caves
These are not just locations — they are emotional beats.
2. Affordable VFX
- Nessie appears in silhouette, mist, partial reveals.
- Anthony is practical + CGI enhancement.
- Storm sequences rely on lighting and atmosphere.
- Most scenes are character‑driven, not effects‑driven.
3. Screen Scotland funding alignment
This project qualifies for:
- Location funding
- Broadcast content funding
- Co‑production support
- Tourism partnerships
4. Franchise continuity
Our other titles — Avalon Code and the Silicon
Sword, Cannonball
Run, Jimmy
Watson and the Magic DinoBot, Summer of Secrets — all fit naturally as future seasons or spin‑offs.

CHARACTERS
- FILMS
- MAGIC
A-Z - PITCH-DECK

THE MAGIC DINOBOT
- From Jameson Hunter (producer), an
original TV series idea, germinated in 2016. Jimmy dreams of building a giant
robot ant as a special project, then one day his dreams come true when the robot he
has built is transformed into a living, breathing, companion. NOTE:
This story is Copyright © Jameson Hunter
Ltd, March 30 2016. All rights
reserved. You will need permission from the author to reproduce the book
cover on the right or any part of the story published on this page.

ANTICS
- ARMOUR
- ARTWORK
- BLACK BOX
- ELECTRONICS - ENERGY
- FRAME
- HEAD - JAWS
- KITS
- LEGS
- MECHANICS
MOTORS
- R/C
DRONE - SENTRY
- SOFTWARE
- SOUND PROOFING
- SPEED
- SUSPENSION
- TAIL
- WARGAMING
- WEAPONS
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