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Discovery of a Signal: An intercepted signal coming from the Moon is a classic, high-stakes science fiction
trigger, a compelling event that triggers this (fictional) mission to the
Moon.
The NASA/ESA angle: This is an ambiguous signal—perhaps complex, repeating patterns similar to the fictional "DNA-style" signals sometimes theorized in other contexts, that are only initially picked up by a deep-space network or a specific lunar-observing mission. The ambiguity necessitates a manned mission to investigate.
HAL and the ARK's Role: Our idea of HAL and the ARK being the only entities with the data and computing power to decode or properly survey the signal's source is
cinematic gold. This creates a reliance on the specialized crew and technology, justifying their central role in the mission.
Evidence of Life: The discovery of evidence of other life on the Moon is a monumental event that would instantly trigger a high-priority mission.
The Nature of the Find: This might not be a living organism, but a biosignature—perhaps an unexpected concentration of organic molecules, fossils in an ice sample from a permanently shadowed crater, or a unique biological byproduct found by a robotic lander or rover (like the kind used in current Mars or icy moon exploration proposals).
All of these possibilities are for John Storm to discover and interpret.
HAL and the ARK's Role: If the discovery is a subtle anomaly in vast datasets (e.g., spectral analysis of lunar dust or ice), the advanced data processing capabilities of HAL and the ARK would be crucial for initial identification and later, for guiding the human investigation on the lunar surface. This adds a layer of mystery and technical necessity.
"STARSHIP
SPACEARK'S MOON MISSION": by CLEANER OCEAN FOUNDATION
Genre: Speculative
Space Alien Sci-Fi Adventure
Copyright © 20 October 2025 (unedited) All rights reserved.
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V1.0 90 page edited draft script)
SCENE 1 -
EXILE OF ELIAS VANCE
THE
MEETING AT THE EDGE OF THE WATER
Scene: “REDEMPTION PROTOCOL”
INT. VANCE’S MARINE COMPOSITES SHOP – DAY
Salt-stained windows filter pale light into a cluttered, diesel-scented
workspace. Tools hang like forgotten relics. A faded photo of the ODYSSEY
VI launch vehicle sits beside a yellowed newspaper clipping:
FAILURE TO LAUNCH: SIX LIVES LOST NASA Engineer Elias Vance Blamed for
Oversight
DR. ELIAS VANCE (50s), weathered and haunted, wipes grease from his hands
as he eyes the only client in the room.
ANYA
SHARMA (30s) stands poised in a charcoal suit, her presence surgical
against the backdrop of industrial decay.
VANCE
You haven’t touched your coffee.
SHARMA
I prefer tea. And I prefer speed, Dr. Vance. I won’t waste your time.
She slides a tablet across the desk. On-screen: a sleek, futuristic
trimaran—carbon fiber and polished aluminum.
VANCE (softly)
The Elizabeth
Swann... Fastest thing on the water.
SHARMA
And I want you to make it the fastest thing off the water.
Vance leans back. The chair groans.
VANCE
You want to strap rockets to a sailboat? That’s insane.
SHARMA
It’s genius. No red tape. No oversight. Just engineering. That’s what
you miss, isn’t it?
Vance zooms in on the schematic. His fingers tremble slightly.
VANCE
What kind of budget?
SHARMA
Blank cheque. Within reason.
Beat. Vance studies her, the weight of two years of failure pressing
against the offer.
VANCE
And this has to do with John
Storm?
SHARMA (smiling)
He’s the key. His ship. His AI. His obsession.
She taps the tablet. A new schematic appears—HAL
and the CYBERCORE
GENETICA.
VANCE (reading)
Real-time structural tolerance in femtoseconds...
SHARMA
We leave Earth orbit in 180 days.
She slides a thick NDA across the desk.
SHARMA (leaning in)
And did I mention The ARK?
VANCE
The ARK?
SHARMA
Storm’s DNA
library. It doesn’t just store genetic code—it recreates it.
Bio-fabrication. Terraforming. Sampling alien
DNA. It’s the blueprint for life.
Vance straightens, the engineer in him awakened.
VANCE
So it’s not just storage. It’s feedstock.
SHARMA
Exactly. And then... there’s the signal.
VANCE
Signal?
She taps the NDA.
SHARMA
A faint broadcast. Repetitive. Attached to it... an outline. Suggestive
of—
Vance signs. The pen scratches across the paper like a blade cutting
through the past.
VANCE
Now tell me. What is the outline suggestive of?
Sharma’s eyes flicker with something between fear and wonder.
SHARMA (whispers)
A structure. Not natural. Not ours. And it’s waiting on the Moon.
FADE
TO BLACK
TITLE CARD: JOHN STORM: SPACEARK™ MOON MISSION
SCENE
2 - THE
ELIZABETH SWANN REBORN
The
Challenge of the Trimaran
INT. NASA HANGAR – NIGHT
A cathedral of steel and silence. The hangar hums with magnetic resonance
shielding. Overhead, robotic
cranes glide like mechanical angels. In the center: the ELIZABETH
SWANN V2, cradled like a relic from a forgotten future.
Its trimaran hull gleams under spectral lighting—sleek, ocean-born, now
bristling with alien appendages: booster mounts, ceramic plating, and
folded solar wings.
DR. ELIAS VANCE (50s, brilliant, disheveled) Stands before a holographic
stress map, eyes flicking between red zones and quantum load simulations.
VANCE (muttering to himself)
We’re bolting a rocket engine to a sailboat. It’s not
engineering—it’s heresy.
A technician struggles nearby with a prototype solar wing—its
articulated joints twitch like insect limbs.
VANCE (CONT'D)
The wings are a godsend. Lunar flux is high enough to cut hydrogen
mass. That saves weight. That saves tiles. That saves lives.
He steps closer to the hull, running a gloved hand over the ceramic
skin—next-gen tiles, laced with graphene and kinetic dampeners.
VANCE (V.O.)
She’s not just reborn. She’s reimagined. A vessel of Earth, retooled
for the void.
THE CYBERCORE MANDATE
INT. NASA HANGAR – CONTINUOUS
A shadow moves through the haze. DIRECTOR ANYA SHARMA (50s, composed,
formidable) enters, her boots echoing against the alloy floor.
ANYA
How’s it going, Doctor?
VANCE
Structurally? It’s lunacy. We’re asking a hull designed for ocean
spray to survive plasma shock and lunar recoil. Why not use a proper crew
craft?
ANYA
Because we don’t need a craft. We need this craft. For him.
She gestures toward the Swann’s stripped electric thruster—now a relic
of its sailing past.
ANYA (CONT'D)
John
Storm. And HAL. The ARK changed everything. We need the decentralized
brain. We need the entanglement.
VANCE
Entanglement?
ANYA
Storm’s neural interface—CyberCore
Genetica. BioCore.
He doesn’t fly the ship. He becomes it.
Vance stares at her, stunned.
VANCE
You’re saying he’s faster than HAL?
ANYA
He’s faster than HAL
with HAL. He’s the only human
who can run the ARK
and the Swann’s systems in tandem. He’s not a pilot. He’s a
processor.
Beat. Vance exhales slowly, recalibrating his skepticism.
VANCE
We’ve added a splashdown parachute. In case Edwards goes dark. A nod to
his sea legs.
He looks up at the Swann, now a hybrid of ocean grace and orbital menace.
VANCE (CONT'D)
But he must be mad to sit atop that much fuel.
ANYA
He swam with ravenous great
whites. To save a humpback.
VANCE
No.
ANYA
And scaled the Shard.
Protest banner. London skyline.
Vance pushes his glasses up, finally convinced.
VANCE
Brave or stupid. Either way, I’ll give him a ship that might survive the
trip. In spades.
ANYA
Good. The clock started ticking eight days ago.
She turns, her silhouette swallowed by the hangar’s shadows. Vance
remains, staring at the Swann—no
longer a vessel, but a question waiting to be answered.
FADE OUT.
SCENE
3 - HYDROCARBON
HORIZON
THE
CONFINED CATHEDRAL
Elias Dynamics, LLC – Clear Lake City, Texas
INT. ELIAS DYNAMICS WORKSHOP – NIGHT
A cavernous aluminum warehouse hums with life. The air is thick with
solvent fumes and the hiss of air compressors. Fluorescent lights flicker
overhead, casting long shadows across cluttered benches and half-assembled
tech.
Dominating the bay—wedged diagonally like a sleeping leviathan—is the
skeletal frame of the ELIZABETH SWANN. Her trimaran hull is bristling with
titanium welds, ceramic tiles, and the ghost of her oceanic past.
DR. ELIAS VANCE (50s, brilliant, grease-streaked) Stands beneath the hull,
eyes locked on a holographic simulation. Stress vectors pulse red across
the screen.
VANCE
Run it again. Two hundred percent margin. If that sealant fails on
ignition... it’s not an abort. It’s a crater.
A TECHNICIAN nods, fingers flying across the console.
VANCE (V.O.)
Liquid
Hydrogen was polite. Liquid
Oxygen? It’s a loaded gun. And I’m asking this hull to hold the
bullet.
THE FENCE AND THE FUSION
EXT. ELIAS DYNAMICS COMPOUND – NIGHT
CHARLEY TEMPLE (30s, sharp, tenacious) crouches behind scrub oak. She eyes
a weak spot in the chain-link fence. With practiced ease, she scales it,
drops silently, and moves toward the bay door.
INT. WORKSHOP – CONTINUOUS
Charley pushes the door open just enough to peer inside. Her breath
catches. The vessel is monstrous—alien in its transformation. She
recognizes the trimaran silhouette beneath the aerospace grafting.
She pulls out her phone. Begins filming.
VANCE (O.S.)
Ahem. Did I say you could film in here?
Charley turns. Vance looms—grease-streaked, glasses askew, voice like
grinding steel.
CHARLEY
Are you Doctor Elias Vance, by any chance?
VANCE
That I may be. And who are you, Madam?
CHARLEY
I scaled the fence. Sorry. Got no answer.
Vance’s eyes drift past her to the Swann. Recognition flickers.
CHARLEY (CONT'D)
I’m a friend of John Storm.
The name unlocks something. Vance’s shoulders drop.
VANCE
He mentioned a few reporters. You one of them?
CHARLEY
Charley Temple. BBC World News.
Beat.
VANCE
Would you like a beverage?
THE INTERVIEW
INT. WORKSHOP – BREAK AREA – MOMENTS LATER
Charley sips a Solar-Cola™.
Vance leans against a bench, wary but curious.
CHARLEY
Could you use a positive article on BBC World News?
VANCE
Could I. Look at this place. If I had the budget of a fourth-tier NASA
vendor, I could turn the damn thing over.
Charley pulls out a mic. Vance begins to speak—rapid-fire, precise,
passionate.
VANCE (CONT'D)
We’re converting a yacht into a spaceship. Horizontal speed into
vertical thrust. Ceramic tile density checks out. LOX stress vectors
hold—on paper. But theory’s just ink. We need a launch. A recovery. A
miracle.
CHARLEY
And the astronaut?
VANCE
Brave. And a friend.
CHARLEY
I’ll try to talk him out of it.
They laugh—a brief, human moment in the shadow of madness.
THE TRUTH BENEATH
INT. WORKSHOP – MAIN BAY – LATER
Charley walks beside Vance, recording ambient footage. The Swann looms
above them.
CHARLEY
Why isn’t NASA
helping?
Vance’s face hardens.
VANCE
Ask them. Official answer? Resource prioritization. Real answer? Fear.
They want predictable. Repeatable. Factory-line engineering. I’m
building what they won’t touch.
CHARLEY
And your recent craft?
VANCE
Flawless, all. I’m doing the work they don’t have the stomach for.
He places a hand on the cold alloy
of the Swann. His masterpiece. His gamble.
FADE OUT.
SCENE
4 - THE
ARTEMIS COMPROMISE
THE
INCONVENIENT TRUTH
Screenplay Adaptation — “The Artemis Compromise” & “The
Inconvenient Truth”
Genre: Sci-Fi Thriller / Political Techno-Drama Tone: Tense, atmospheric,
corporate noir meets lunar isolation Visual Style: Stark lighting, analog
tech, deep shadows, retro-futurist interfaces, industrial realism
INT. NETWORK NEWSROOM – NIGHT
Montage of news anchors from CNN, FOX, CBS, and BBC. Each screen flickers
with urgency. The same story, different spin.
ANCHOR 1 (V.O.)
“NASA’s Artemis program, once the pride of American spaceflight, now
faces scrutiny...”
ANCHOR 2 (V.O.)
“...while Elias Dynamics, a private firm led by disgraced engineer Dr.
Elias Vance, prepares to launch a converted sailboat to the Moon...”
ANCHOR 3 (V.O.)
“...a sailboat, yes, you heard that right.”
Cut to:
INT. NASA – DEEP SPACE PROJECTS DIVISION – NIGHT
Dimly lit. Fluorescent lights buzz overhead. ANNA SHARMA (40s), sharp,
composed, watches the news loop. Her jaw tightens.
ENGINEER (O.S.)
“They’re calling it the Hydrocarbon Horizon. We’re the glacier.
He’s the fire.”
Sharma turns, eyes cold.
SHARMA
“Then it’s time we stopped pretending we’re not in the same race.”
THE RELUCTANT PARTNERSHIP
INT. SECURE MEETING ROOM – HOUSTON – DAY
A sterile, windowless room. Fluorescent lights hum. DR. ELIAS VANCE (50s),
gaunt, brilliant, sits across from SHARMA and DEPUTY DIRECTOR HAYES (60s,
bureaucratic armor).
HAYES
“Your methods are... unconventional. But your results are undeniable.”
VANCE (dry)
“Physics doesn’t care about protocol.”
Sharma slides a sleek tablet across the table. On it: schematics of the
ELIZABETH SWANN MKII, now bristling with boosters and solar wings.
SHARMA
“Full access to the VAB. Cryogenics. Telemetry. No strings—except
two.”
She gestures. The door opens. CAPTAIN KAI LI (40s), silent, composed,
steps in. His eyes scan Vance like a threat assessment.
SHARMA (CONT’D)
“Data transparency. And him.”
Vance studies Li. No words. Just a nod. Then he signs.
VANCE
“Captain Li... welcome aboard the Swann.”
THE LONDON REACTION
INT. BBC WORLD NEWS STUDIO – NIGHT
JILL BIRD (50s), poised, addresses the camera. Behind her, a graphic:
“NASA JOINS PRIVATE MOON MISSION.”
JILL
“In a stunning reversal, NASA has partnered with Elias Dynamics and the
enigmatic John Storm. The Elizabeth Swann MKII is now the centerpiece of a
joint lunar survey.”
Cut to CHARLEY TEMPLE (30s), sharp, defiant, standing by with a smirk.
JILL (CONT’D)
“Charley, you broke this story. What’s the real win for NASA?”
CHARLEY
“Speed. And plausible deniability. If it works, they’re visionaries.
If it fails... well, it was never their idea.”
THE ARTFUL DODGE
INT. MEDIA STUDIO – VARIOUS LOCATIONS – MONTAGE
JOHN STORM (40s), rugged, enigmatic, sits under harsh lights. His flight
suit is pristine, but his eyes betray exhaustion. Interviewers fire
questions. He parries with calm precision.
ABC INTERVIEWER
“Captain Storm, what’s the mission’s true objective?”
STORM
“Subsurface anomalies. Geological surveys. We’re mapping the Moon’s
forgotten history.”
Cut to:
BBC INTERVIEWER
“Is this an alien hunt?”
STORM (smiling)
“The Moon is alien enough. Every rock up there is a relic. We’re just
listening.”
Cut to:
INT. BBC STUDIO – NIGHT Charley and Jill exchange a glance. They know
the truth is deeper.
JILL
“He’s good.”
CHARLEY
“He’s parrying. Beautifully.”
FIRST
CONTACT: CREW AND CORE
INT. VEHICLE ASSEMBLY BUILDING (VAB), KENNEDY SPACE CENTER – NIGHT
A cavernous chamber of steel and silence. Overhead, gantry cranes hang
like mechanical sentinels. The ELIZABETH SWANN MKII dominates Bay 3—no
longer a trimaran, but a monstrous fusion of yacht and rocket.
Its hull is cloaked in ceramic heat-shield tiles. Chrome LOX boosters
gleam under spectral lighting. The original twin hulls are barely visible
beneath hydrocarbon tanks and structural grafts.
JOHN STORM (40s), rugged, introspective, stands on a gantry, staring at
the vessel. His eyes find a strip of faded vinyl: “Elizabeth Swann.”
Beneath it, new lettering: “SpaceArk MKII.”
A voice breaks the silence.
KAI LI (O.S.)
“Looks like a rocket ate a yacht, Captain.”
Storm turns. CAPTAIN KAI LI (40s), precise and unreadable, approaches in a
dark-blue NASA flight suit. A data tablet glows in his hand.
STORM
“Doctor Vance calls it a fusion of maritime and space-faring
architecture.”
LI
“It’s effective. And complex. I’m here to ensure it meets NASA’s
standards—and to provide astronaut expertise. Geologist. Navigator.
Failure analysis.”
Storm studies him. The tension is palpable.
STORM
“On the Swann, we don’t follow protocols. We adapt. We trust
instinct.”
LI
“Instinct is a liability in high-G. You follow the current. I follow the
trajectory. We’ll need common ground.”
A beat. The hum of machinery underscores the silence.
INT. VAB – LOWER ACCESS HATCH – MOMENTS LATER
ELIAS VANCE (50s), brilliant, disheveled, emerges from beneath the ship,
wiping grease from his hands.
VANCE
“John! Don’t mind Li. He’s paid to scare us into obedience.”
STORM
“He’s right to be cautious. You’ve built a weapon out of a
sanctuary.”
VANCE
“And you’re about to fly it. Final check is yours.”
He gestures toward a shielded compartment in the ship’s spine.
INT. SWANN MKII – MAIN CONTROL DECK – NIGHT
Storm climbs into the cockpit. It’s stark—two holographic interfaces
dominate the space. He places his hand on the console. A soft pulse
spreads through his palm.
A synthesized voice fills the cabin.
HAL (V.O.)
“Welcome back, Captain Storm. All systems are green and awaiting final
initialization.”
STORM
“HAL, status report on the ARK Core.”
HAL (V.O.)
“The ARK genetic and data-synthesis array is fully cold-integrated.
Lunar anomaly data secured. DNA fragments triangulated.”
Storm closes his eyes. The ARK is more than data—it’s a living entity,
born from alien discovery. A signal bounced from Mars. A mystery buried in
lunar dust.
STORM
“Crew compatibility?”
HAL (V.O.)
“Captain Kai Li: 78% probability of functional success. 45% probability
of interpersonal friction.”
Storm smirks. Leave it to HAL to quantify tension.
INT. VAB – GANTRY – MOMENTS LATER
Storm steps back onto the gantry. Li and Vance wait.
STORM
“The ship and the core are ready. I’ll follow your launch protocols,
Captain Li. But once we hit lunar orbit, the ARK calls the shots.”
LI
“Agreed, Captain. Let’s get to the Moon.”
No handshake. Just a nod. A silent pact beneath the looming vessel.
The Swann MKII hums with latent power. Fuel lines hiss. The countdown
looms.
SCENE
5 - ARES
CORPORATION AWAKENS
Genre: Sci-Fi Thriller / Corporate Espionage Tone: Cold, calculating,
atmospheric Visual Style: High-tech minimalism, glass and steel, ambient
hums, deep shadows, digital overlays
INT. ARES
CORPORATION – CEO OFFICE – NIGHT
A cavernous, glass-walled office on the 40th floor. The skyline pulses
with neon and drone traffic. MARCUS
THORNE (50s), sharp-suited, razor-eyed, stands behind a desk of
obsidian and chrome. A holographic solar system spins slowly above the
desk—crystalline, cold.
Thorne doesn’t look at Earth. He looks through it.
THORNE (quietly)
“The Elizabeth
Swann.”
He taps the hologram. A small icon near the Moon pulses—SpaceArk MKII.
THORNE (CONT’D)
“It should have been ours. A custom trimaran. Tri-fuel. High-efficiency
hull. A perfect R&D platform.”
Across the desk, ZARA CORNWALLIS (30s), composed, lethal, stands with a
secure tablet. She doesn’t speak. Thorne doesn’t tolerate
interruptions.
THORNE (CONT’D)
“Anya
Sharma secured it with sentiment. Whales. Humpbacks. Dan
Hawk and his romantic notions.”
He snorts. Dry. Humorless.
THORNE (CONT’D)
“Sentiment is a liquidity risk, Zara. And that’s what Storm’s
mission is—a risk to Ares’s projected growth.”
He zooms in on the SpaceArk
icon. Data streams flicker: launch trajectory, crew manifest, HAL AI
status.
THORNE (CONT’D)
“Storm sees the solar system as a frontier. We see it as a balance
sheet. Control equals survival. And only those who take what they want
truly succeed.”
Thorne leans back. His chair sighs. The room hums with quiet menace.
INT. ARES OFFICE – CONTINUOUS
Zara opens her tablet. A secure interface glows. She speaks for the first
time.
ZARA
“The first leaks are prepped. Targeting core instability.”
THORNE
“Good. The narrative must be simple. Damning. Storm is not a
hero—he’s a reckless adventurer. Not seeking peace. Running from
disaster.”
Thorne’s eyes flicker. A memory: Storm rescuing Kulo-Luna, the humpback
whale. The media frenzy. The sentiment.
THORNE (CONT’D)
“Leak the metadata. Frame the Swann conversion as unvetted. A desperate
escape. Brand it not as SpaceArk—but as a Rogue Vessel.”
Zara’s fingers fly across the screen. Algorithms deploy. Deep-web
contacts light up.
ZARA
“‘Rogue Vessel’ narrative is propagating. We’re reinforcing the
Vance campaign. Linking his unethical research to the mission crew.”
THORNE (smiling coldly)
“Vance opposed our ocean drilling. Now his legacy poisons Storm’s
mission. The public loves a conspiracy. Make Storm look panicked. Make the
Swann look unstable.”
INT. ARES OFFICE – WINDOW VIEW – NIGHT
Thorne walks to the window. The city below glows like a nervous circuit
board. His reflection merges with the skyline.
THORNE (V.O.)
“The goal is a hostile takeover. Storm’s weakness is sentimentality.
That will be his undoing.”
He turns to Zara. Final command.
THORNE
“Start planting the seeds. Make the SpaceArk a liability. Once it’s
devalued... we stabilize the asset.”
Zara nods. The screen fades to black.
SCENE
6 - COUNTDOWN
ON THE COAST
EXT.
FLORIDA COAST – NIGHT
A colossal silhouette looms over the Atlantic. The Elizabeth
Swann MKII rests within the skeletal remains of a repurposed offshore
drilling platform—now fused into Kennedy Space Center’s launch
infrastructure.
Steam coils from custom conduits. Technicians in NASA gear, stare at
baffling manifolds and energy nodes. The system hums flawlessly.
INT. SWANN MKII – COCKPIT – CONTINUOUS
The helm glows with sterile blue light. Five shock-dampening seats line
the retrofitted bridge. Nervous energy crackles.
CAPTAIN JOHN STORM Calm and precise, runs diagnostics.
STORM
Everyone secured?
DAN HAWK Rugged, leans back in his seat, eyes scanning the alien cockpit.
DAN
Reminds me of Alien,
the Nostromo, skip. All the blue lights and that deep, abiding sense
something’s about to go catastrophically wrong.
Storm’s mouth twitches.
STORM
Thinking the same thing myself, Dan.
CLEOPATRA Ageless, regal and composed, adjusts her harness.
CLEOPATRA
Comfortable though. Spartan, but efficient.
Storm turns to DR.
LENA HADID, focused, checking her gear.
STORM
Doctor Hadid, all equipment onboard?
HADID
Yes, Captain. Medical telemetry, sampling arrays—everything’s secured
and integrated with the ARK Core.
Storm nods, relieved.
STORM
HAL, are you fully linked into the Vance systems?
HAL (V.O.), warm and articulate.
HAL
Affirmative, Captain. Ms. Hadid’s splice into the ancillary grid was
elegant. The Vance protocols are, to use a human idiom, exquisitely
logical.
Storm turns to his co-pilot, CAPTAIN KAI LI, composed, finishing
pre-flight checks.
STORM
Captain Li, thoughts on the new ride?
Li grins—rare, genuine.
LI
Steep learning curve, John. But HAL and your CyberCore interface? Latency
is zero. NASA’s
envious.
Storm smirks.
STORM
Envy’s a powerful motivator.
He pushes thoughts of Ares Corp aside.
STORM (CONT'D)
Mission parameters—attainable?
Li meets his gaze.
LI
We’re in capable hands. Numbers work. Energy expenditure’s within
tolerance. Only unknown is the human factor.
Hadid speaks firmly.
HADID
If HAL and the Swann get us there and back, I’m confident we’ll secure
the lunar data. Launch is the biggest hurdle.
Storm exhales—fractional relief. He thinks of Elias Vance, of Professor
Douglas Storm. Genius runs in the blood.
He glances at the countdown clock.
STORM (V.O.)
The greatest ship ever built. And the only way out.
A successful journey won’t just mean a lunar landing—it’s the
gateway to the stars.
SCENE
7 - LAUNCH,
FIRE AND SEPARATION
EXT. KENNEDY SPACE CENTER – LAUNCH PAD 39A – PRE-DAWN
A steel monolith looms through Atlantic
mist. The Elizabeth Swann MKII stands poised—its trimaran
origins buried beneath ceramic plating and matte-black thermal shielding.
CHARLEY TEMPLE (30s), raincoat flapping, speaks into her mic.
CHARLEY
Here we are at Kennedy Space Center, where rockets usually bear the logos
of aerospace titans. But today... our subject is different.
She gestures to the vessel.
CHARLEY (CONT'D)
Once an open-water trimaran, now a futurist’s Shuttle. The hull is
barely visible beneath thermal armor.
INT. BBC WORLD NEWS STUDIO – LONDON
JILL BIRD (50s), composed, speaks to camera.
JILL
Charley, the transformation is stunning. But the engineering community is
divided. What’s powering this ‘rogue vessel’?
EXT. LAUNCH PAD – CONTINUOUS
Charley looks up at the towering booster.
CHARLEY
They’re using a modified SpaceX Starship system. Super Heavy booster,
Starship upper stage—capable of delivering 100 metric tons to the lunar
surface.
JILL (V.O.)
Staggering statistics.
CHARLEY
Raptor engines. Methane
and LOX. A scale of rocketry now co-opted for Captain Storm’s
brainchild.
Hydraulic arms retract. LOX boosters hiss. Vapor merges with sea mist. The
sky bruises with dawn.
INT. HOUSTON MISSION CONTROL – NIGHT
Rows of engineers. Glowing consoles. A cathedral of tension.
FLIGHT DIRECTOR (50s), stone-faced, stands.
FLIGHT DIRECTOR
Final go/no-go. Propulsion?
PROPULSION OFFICER
Go.
FLIGHT DIRECTOR
Guidance?
GUIDANCE OFFICER
Go.
FLIGHT DIRECTOR
Payload?
PAYLOAD OFFICER
ARK
Core stable. HAL confirms integration.
FLIGHT DIRECTOR
CapCom, patch me through to the Swann.
INT. SWANN MKII – COCKPIT – CONTINUOUS
Soft blue glow. JOHN
STORM, calm, focused. CAPTAIN
KAI LI, tense, scanning instruments.
HAL (V.O.), serene.
HAL
All systems nominal. T-minus 120 seconds.
Storm places his hand on the console. A pulse of light spreads.
STORM
Swann is go for launch, Flight Director.
FLIGHT DIRECTOR (V.O.)
Copy that, Swann. Godspeed.
Li tightens his harness.
LI
Here we go, Captain.
STORM
Our fight begins now, Kai. Not with physics—but with whispers.
EXT. LAUNCH PAD – MOMENTS LATER
Digital countdown ticks. Steam vents. A low growl builds into a thunderous
roar.
COUNTDOWN (V.O.)
T-minus 10… 9… 8…
Global media holds its breath. CNN, FOX, BBC—all silent.
COUNTDOWN (V.O.)
3… 2… 1… ignition.
The Swann lifts off in a column of fire. Waves break golden. It
climbs—slowly, then with terrifying grace.
INT. MISSION CONTROL – CONTINUOUS
Applause. Tears. Engineers exhale.
In the VIP room, DR. ELIAS VANCE, silent, fingers crossed.
VANCE (mouthing)
Go John.
FLIGHT DIRECTOR
Trajectory nominal. Booster separation in 30 seconds.
EXT. STRATOSPHERE – CONTINUOUS
Super Heavy boosters detach in synchronized ballet. solar
wings unfold mid-ascent. The Swann transitions to orbital burn.
INT. SWANN MKII – COCKPIT – CONTINUOUS
Storm watches Earth shrink. Li monitors trajectory.
LI
Nice one Elias. Thank you Anya.
INT. BBC STUDIO – CONTINUOUS
Charley wipes a tear.
CHARLEY
Godspeed, John.
She turns to her cameraman.
CHARLEY (CONT'D)
NASA, let’s go find the signal.
MONTAGE – GLOBAL REACTIONS
— ARES CORP DRONES record the launch, hoping for failure. — MUSKET
MELONI sips whiskey aboard his yacht.
MELONI
Best launch I’ve seen. The crazy bastard pulled it off.
— MARCUS
THORNE slams his desk.
THORNE
Storm isn’t an acquisition. He’s a threat.
— JILL BIRD closes her segment.
JILL
Elias Vance, long smeared, now vindicated. All of us at the BBC wish John
Storm the very best.
EXT. SPACE – FINAL SHOT
The Swann glides into translunar trajectory. Earth fades. The Moon awaits.
SCENE
8 - THE
FIRST SILENCE
Scene:
Deep Space — Interior & Exterior of the Elizabeth Swann MKII ("SpaceArk")
EXT. SPACE — THE VOID
The Earth hangs in the black like a sapphire crescent, distant and
delicate. A jewel receding into memory.
The Elizabeth Swann MKII glides silently, its hull catching faint
starlight. The starscape is vast, cold, infinite.
INT. SPACEARK — COMMAND MODULE
A soft hum. The ambient sound of life support. Inside, the crew floats in
microgravity, each absorbed in their own silence.
HAL (V.O.)
Distance traveled: four hundred twenty thousand kilometers. Current
velocity: seven-point-six kilometers per second. Estimated time to Lunar
Insertion Burn: thirty-eight hours, twelve minutes. All systems nominal.
The voice is calm, clinical, disembodied. A lullaby for the void.
INT. COMMAND MODULE — FLIGHT DECK
CAPTAIN JOHN STORM, weathered and composed, nods slowly. He floats with
practiced ease.
STORM
Solid report, HAL. Thank you. Li, keep an eye on the power consumption
logs. I'm grabbing an hour. Wake me if the gravity compensators hiccup...
or if Li makes coffee.
He drifts toward the sleep pod. No drama. Just protocol. Just survival.
INT. OBSERVATION DOME
CLEOPATRA, former ancient
Egyptian Nile
Queen, regal and wide-eyed, floats inches from the reinforced glass.
Her silhouette framed against the stars.
CLEOPATRA (whispers)
It is... a void. Where are the gods of the night sky? Why is there nothing
but this cold, terrible distance?
Her voice trembles with awe and existential dread.
DAN HAWK, enthusiastic and bright, drifts beside her.
DAN
It's not a void, Cleo. It's full of things. Those tiny pinpricks? Every
one is a sun. Most have planets. Just like Earth. Billions of solar
systems, spinning in the dark.
Cleopatra turns, her golden eyes wide.
CLEOPATRA
More suns? More worlds? But... we worshiped Ra.
The only Sol. Your ancestors... they have diminished the sacred to a
multitude.
She turns back to the Moon, now a brighter speck. Her gaze locks onto it.
Something ancient stirs.
INT. MEDICAL BAY — ADJACENT
DR. LENA HADID, analytical and empathetic, watches Cleopatra from a
distance. She scribbles on a digital pad.
LENA (to herself)
That’s not fear of the dark. It’s recognition.
She frowns, sensing something deeper—mythic, unresolved.
INT. COMMAND MODULE — FLIGHT DECK
KAI LI, precise and grounded, works the holographic interface. His fingers
dance across diagnostics.
LI
SpaceArk to Mission Control, this is Captain Li, reporting in. All systems
green. Speed and approach vector nominal. Holding tight to predicted
trajectory. Over.
A beat. Then Earth replies, distant but clear.
HOUSTON (V.O.)
SpaceArk, this is Houston. Copy that, Captain Li. Everything looks good at
this end. Excellent work. Over and out.
Li leans back, satisfied. Smooth flight. Boring flight. Just the way he
likes it.
INT. SPACEARK — WIDE SHOT
Storm sleeps. Dan gestures toward the Crab Nebula, still explaining. Lena
watches Cleopatra. Cleopatra watches the Moon.
The ship floats onward, suspended in the black.
EXT. SPACE — THE MOON
The silver-grey orb grows brighter. Still distant. Still silent. But
pulling. Beckoning.
INT. OBSERVATION DOME
Cleopatra’s
breath fogs the glass. Her eyes shimmer.
CLEOPATRA (softly)
I feel... something. Not gravity. Something older.
INT. SPACEARK — COMMAND MODULE
HAL’s voice returns, low and steady.
HAL (V.O.)
Entering phase: The First Silence.
EXT. SPACE — WIDE SHOT
The SpaceArk glides deeper into the void. Alone. Silent. Bound for the
Moon.
FADE TO BLACK.
SCENE
9 - DEEP
SPACE AND DOUBT
Scene:
“The Sacred Breach” Genre: Sci-Fi Drama | Location: Aboard the
SpaceArk MKII
“Elizabeth Swann” | Lunar Orbit
INT. SPACEARK – COMMAND BRIDGE – DEEP SPACE
Silence. The void outside is velvet black, speckled with distant stars.
The SpaceArk glides with serene majesty.
Suddenly—
ALARM A banshee wail pierces the calm. Control panels flash arterial red.
HAL (V.O.)
ALERT! SYSTEM INTEGRITY COMPROMISE.
UNIDENTIFIED OBJECTS
DETECTED.
TRAJECTORY INTERSECTING LUNAR APPROACH.
POTENTIAL DEBRIS FIELD
OR CLOAKED VESSEL.
JOHN STORM, rugged and composed, stares at the crescent Moon. A
low-frequency THUNK vibrates through the deck.
JOHN (into comms) HAL, report!
HAL (V.O.) Impact confirmed. Oxygen leak—five percent per minute. Bubble
Hull integrity compromised.
DAN HAWK, wiry electronics genius, grips his console.
DAN
Holy fuel
cells, Skipper! Could Vance have got his sums wrong?
JOHN
Ye of little
faith.
DAN
Just… doubt.
The bridge dims. A crackle from the comms.
HOUSTON (V.O.)
SpaceArk, come in! Captain Storm?
JOHN
Hello Houston. We’re venting oxygen.
Stand by.
JOHN
Captain Li, take the helm. Dan, with me. Eyes on the breach.
INT. SPACEARK – CORRIDOR TO AFT MODULE
They pass through two airtight bulkheads. The third door reads: TEMP
DELTA: -85.0°C.
JOHN
Suit time.
INT. LOCKER BAY – MOMENTS LATER
CLEOPATRA stands waiting. Regal, timeless, her gaze heavy.
CLEOPATRA
John, Dan… there is something I must say.
JOHN
Outer Space Treaty?
CLEOPATRA
No. In my time, the heavens were sacred. We aligned our temples
to Sopdet—Sirius—and to Sah, soul of Osiris—Orion.
Not coordinates. Prayers carved in stone in the Pyramids.
JOHN
You think we should turn back?
CLEOPATRA
No. But tread as pilgrims, not conquerors. The stars are the
bones of gods… and the breath of eternity.
DAN
We’re moving too fast. Taking too much.
INT. AFT MODULE – AIRLOCK CYCLE
The trio enters the de-pressurized module. Frost glitters. A jagged tear
leaks oxygen into space.
JOHN (into helmet comms)
SpaceArk to Houston. Impact confirmed. Debris
suspected. Awaiting observations before repair.
HOUSTON (V.O.)
Stand by. Elias is working on a Apollo
13 solution.
DAN (sealing system manually)
Module isolated.
HAL (V.O.)
Pressure stabilized. No further oxygen loss.
JOHN
Nice one, boy wonder.
John kicks the warped alloy gently.
JOHN
I’m welding
this up.
DAN
Just… be careful.
INT. MISSION CONTROL – HOUSTON
DR. ELIAS VANCE, brilliant and panicked, tapes ceramic samples to a mockup
hull.
HOUSTON (V.O.)
SpaceArk, Elias calling.
JOHN (V.O.)
Good to hear your voice, Doctor.
ELIAS (V.O.)
Simulated patch complete. John—welder and plates. Dan—ceramic tiles
and adhesive. Locker four.
EXT. SPACEARK – OUTER HULL – SPACEWALK
John and Dan tethered to the ship’s spine. Earth
glows below.
DAN (awestruck)
It’s… everything. And nothing.
JOHN
Just another pressure zone.
John welds the aluminum
plate. Sparks burst silently. Dan bonds ceramic tiles. The repair is
ugly—but solid.
JOHN (into comms)
SpaceArk to Houston. Repairs complete. Sealed. Safe to continue mission?
HOUSTON (V.O.)
Go, Captain Storm. Go! Houston out.
INT. SPACEARK – AIRLOCK – RETURN
John stares at the scarred hull. Cleopatra’s words echo.
CLEOPATRA
(V.O.)
Pilgrims… not conquerors.
John cycles back inside. The mission continues. But the doubt remains.
SCENE
10 - LUNAR
BALLET
Sci-Fi
Drama | Setting: Lunar Orbit, Earth Broadcast Studios, Mission Control
Houston
FADE IN:
EXT. SPACE – ABOVE THE MOON – WIDE SHOT
A colossal spacecraft—the converted Elizabeth
Swann, now the SpaceArk—drifts
silently above the cratered lunar surface. Its solar sails shimmer,
adjusting like wings in a cosmic breeze.
NARRATOR (V.O.) The SpaceArk was no nimble fighter, but a cathedral of
civilization. And now, it danced.
EXT. SPACEARK – SOLAR SAILS – CLOSE-UP
Panels tilt with precision, catching solar radiation. No thrusters. No
roar. Just the whisper of light steering mass.
INT. BBC WORLD NEWS STUDIO – LONDON – MEDIUM SHOT
JILL BIRD sits poised at a sleek desk. Behind her, a split-screen shows
the Moon and the SpaceArk’s live feed.
JILL BIRD
This is Jill Bird, live from London, as the SpaceArk prepares for an
unprecedented lunar landing. We cross now to Charley Temple in Houston,
with Dr.
Elias Vance.
INT. MISSION CONTROL – HOUSTON – OVER-THE-SHOULDER SHOT
CHARLEY TEMPLE stands amid glowing monitors and murmuring engineers. DR.
ELIAS VANCE leans into a mic, weary but alert.
CHARLEY TEMPLE
Dr. Vance, what are the technical challenges of landing a craft this size?
DR. VANCE
The Moon’s gravity is one-sixth Earth’s. No atmosphere to slow
descent. Our wings are useless here. We rely on gyroscopes, HAL’s AI
corrections, and hypergolic engines.
INSERT – SCHEMATIC DISPLAY – CLOSE-UP
A digital schematic shows the SpaceArk’s descent profile, engine specs,
and landing gear.
DR. VANCE (V.O.)
Aerozine 50 and nitrogen tetroxide. Thrust: 60 to 70 kilonewtons.
Crushable aluminum honeycomb legs—twice Apollo’s capacity. We’re
landing a small city.
INT. SPACEARK – COMMAND CABIN – TRACKING SHOT
CAPTAIN JOHN STORM and CAPTAIN LI sit fused to their consoles. Blue-white
glow from proximity alerts bathes their faces.
CAMERA: PUSH IN ON STORM’S HAND Hovering over the master ignition
control.
INT. SPACEARK – CREW MODULE – FLOATING SHOT
LENA HADID spins gracefully, securing loose items. CLEOPATRA floats near
the helm, gazing at the Moon—not as rock, but as prophecy.
CAMERA: OVER CLEOPATRA’S SHOULDER The lunar surface reflects in her
eyes.
DAN HAWK (clinging to a handhold)
Console’s steady. Numbers are good.
EXT. SPACEARK – VIEWPORT – POV SHOT
Crater rims rush upward. The Moon looms immense, textured, and
terrifyingly real.
INT. COMMAND CABIN – CLOSE-UP ON STORM
JOHN STORM
HAL, final checks.
HAL (V.O.)
All systems green, Captain Storm. Preparing for landing gear deployment.
EXT. SPACEARK – LANDING GEAR – LOW ANGLE
A deep metallic THRUM echoes. Massive legs swing down, locking with three
CLANKS.
INT. BBC STUDIO – LONDON – MEDIUM SHOT
JILL BIRD watches the feed, visibly moved.
JILL BIRD
Thank you, Charley Temple and Dr. Elias Vance. More on this breaking
story, as the space captains attempt to make history.
EXT. SPACE – ABOVE THE MOON – WIDE SHOT
The SpaceArk begins its descent. The ballet is over. The engines prepare
to sing.
FADE OUT.
SCENE
11 - CRATER
OF ORIGINS
Genre:
Sci-Fi Mystery | Setting: Lunar Surface – Sea of Tranquility
FADE IN:
EXT. LUNAR SURFACE – SEA OF TRANQUILITY – WIDE SHOT
The Elizabeth Swann, a colossal spacecraft, rests motionless in the
regolith. Its landing legs are partially buried in the dust of an ancient
crater. The silence is absolute.
INT. LUNAR MODULE – COMMAND CABIN – CLOSE-UP
CAPTAIN JOHN STORM, sweat glistening on his brow, slowly releases his grip
on the master throttle.
JOHN STORM
HAL, confirm structural integrity and habitat seal.
HAL (V.O.)
Confirmed, Captain Storm. We are stable. Welcome to the Sea of
Tranquility.
INT. COMMAND CABIN – WIDE SHOT
The crew exhales collectively. STORM and CAPTAIN LI begin diagnostics. The
hum of low-power systems fills the air.
INT. OBSERVATION BAY – TRACKING SHOT
CLEOPATRA floats toward the viewport, her silhouette framed against the
Moon’s monochrome surface. Craters stretch into shadow.
CAMERA: OVER CLEOPATRA’S SHOULDER A massive crater glows faintly under
Earthlight.
CLEOPATRA
Lena. Bring up the topographical overlay. That crater—east of the
terminator—it aligns perfectly with the Giza plateau.
INT. NAVIGATION STATION – MEDIUM SHOT
LENA HADID, skeptical but curious, taps her console. A holographic
projection blooms.
CAMERA: INSERT – HOLOGRAM DISPLAY Moon surface mapped. Giza
plateau highlighted. A crimson thread stretches toward Mars.
LENA
Cleo, all terrestrial features align with something if you draw enough
lines.
INT. COMMAND CABIN – WIDE SHOT
HAL (V.O.)
Confirmed. Celestial vector intersects the center of the Khufu
pyramid and extends toward the Martian equator. Probability of random
coincidence: 0.0003 percent.
INT. OBSERVATION BAY – CLOSE-UP ON CLEOPATRA
Her eyes gleam with ancient certainty. She turns, regal and resolute.
CLEOPATRA
This is no accident. The heavens were not coordinates—they were a map.
The pyramids were beacons. They point to Mars because Mars was once…
fertile. Alive.
INT. COMMAND CABIN – TWO-SHOT
LENA raises an eyebrow, skeptical.
LENA
Are you suggesting the builders of Giza were guided by extraterrestrials?
CLEOPATRA
Not guided. Instructed. The knowledge was seeded—an inoculation passed
down through time.
INT. HOLOGRAM DISPLAY – INSERT
The base of the Khufu pyramid
overlays the Martian Tharsis region. Geometries match.
CLEOPATRA (V.O.)
The crater here? It’s not just an impact scar. It’s a lens. A cosmic
lens—positioned to focus energy… or signals.
INT. COMMAND CABIN – HAL INTERFACE – CLOSE-UP
HAL (V.O.)
Captain Li has detected localized magnetic anomalies in the crater basin.
Data suggests non-lunar elements present in the geology.
INT. OBSERVATION BAY – LOW ANGLE ON CLEOPATRA
She grips the railing, eyes blazing.
CLEOPATRA
The crater is a receiver. The pyramids were transmitters. And Mars—Mars
is the archive. Earth’s DNA may have been encoded and sent from there.
INT. COMMAND CABIN – MEDIUM SHOT
LENA, stunned, tries to process.
LENA
You’re saying panspermia wasn’t random? It was… directed? A targeted
gift?
CLEOPATRA
Directed panspermia. The ‘gods’ of old were engineers. Terraformers.
They left clues in stone and orbit—for us.
EXT. SPACE – MARS IN THE DISTANCE – WIDE SHOT
Mars glows faintly, a red eye watching from the void.
INT. COMMAND CABIN – HAL INTERFACE – CLOSE-UP
HAL (V.O.)
Incoming telemetry from Mars orbit relay station. Spectral data suggests
complex organic compounds in Valles Marineris match a subset of the
SpaceArk’s archived genetic library.
INT. OBSERVATION BAY – CLOSE-UP ON CLEOPATRA
She smiles, ancient satisfaction settling into her features.
CLEOPATRA
Then the archive is waking up. And we, the inheritors, have finally
arrived at the library doors.
FADE OUT.
SCENE
12 - DNA
ARK, THE LUNAR ARCHIVE
Genre:
Sci-Fi Mystery | Setting: Crater of Origins, Lunar Subsurface Chamber,
Observation Deck
FADE IN:
INT. CRATER OF ORIGINS – ROVER CONTROL STATION – CLOSE-UP
LENA HADID’s eyes widen as the rover’s sensor package flashes red. Her
fatigue vanishes.
LENA
Captain! HAL, bring up the spectrum analysis on Rover Feed One!
INT. COMMAND CABIN – MAIN HOLOSCREEN – INSERT
A twisting helix appears—alien DNA. Four strands. Six unknown
nucleobases. Beautiful. Terrifying.
LENA (whispers)
It’s too stable… too complex. It’s alien. Not Martian. Not
Earth-derived. Panspermia wasn’t random. It was a payload.
EXT. LUNAR SURFACE – WIDE SHOT
JOHN STORM, CLEOPATRA, and LENA descend into the crater in lightweight
suits, following the rover’s path.
INT. SUBSURFACE CHAMBER – TRACKING SHOT
Crystalline data nodes pulse faintly in the walls. Cold air. Stillness.
JOHN
HAL, scan these structures.
HAL (V.O.)
Scanning… Captain, these are archives. Planetary histories. Earth’s
pre-Cretaceous climate cycles. Oceanic shifts. Interplanetary warnings.
INT. CHAMBER – CLOSE-UP ON JOHN
He stares at a flickering wall—visualizations of ancient seas.
DAN
Holy fuel
cells, Skip… They’ve been studying us.
JOHN (CONT’D)
We’re not alone. We’ve been monitored for millennia.
INT. CHAMBER – CLOSE-UP ON LENA
She’s speechless. The foundations of evolutionary theory crumble in her
mind.
CUT TO:
INT. ELIZABETH SWANN – DATA LAB – OVER-THE-SHOULDER
DAN
HAWK runs seismic scans. A 3D wireframe blooms—fractal, coral-like
structures beneath the regolith.
DAN
Jeez, Captain, what do you make of this?
INT. CHAMBER – HOLOGRAPHIC PROJECTION – INSERT
The wireframe appears on the archive wall. Curved, repeating patterns.
JOHN
It’s biomimicry. Oceanic systems. Living geometry.
DAN (V.O.)
Exactly. It’s a language of conservation. They were marine scientists.
Their world died. Earth was the experiment.
INT. CHAMBER – WIDE SHOT
Silence. Life support hisses. The builders were not gods—but desperate
custodians.
CUT TO:
INT. CHAMBER – CRYSTAL NODE – CLOSE-UP
The node nearest CLEOPATRA flares, bathing her in ethereal light.
HAL (V.O.)
Concentrated signal detected. Source: Valles Marineris basin, Mars.
Spectral match with alien DNA.
CLEOPATRA
By Osiris.
They are speaking to us. This is not a warning—it’s a call. The
archive holds the blueprints. The pyramids
are antennae. Mars is the active archive.
INT. CHAMBER – CLOSE-UP ON CLEOPATRA
A tear glides down her cheek.
CLEOPATRA
All praise to Anya
Sharma… Her hunch was an oracle.
JOHN
She sent us not to explore… But to answer.
CUT TO:
INT. OBSERVATION DECK – WIDE SHOT
The crew watches Earthrise. No suits. Just awe.
CAMERA: PUSH IN ON EARTH A fragile blue marble crests the lunar horizon.
INT. OBSERVATION DECK – CLOSE-UP ON JOHN
He places his hand on the viewport glass.
JOHN
We came as conquerors… We found a library built by ghosts. I swear, by
Marineris, by the bones of those who tried and failed— The oceans and
climate systems will not be lost. We are the inheritors. We are the final
custodians.
INT. OBSERVATION DECK – CLOSE-UP ON CREW
CLEOPATRA and LENA nod, eyes wet. DAN places a hand on John’s shoulder.
INT. HELM CONSOLE – MEDIUM SHOT
CAPTAIN KAI LI stands apart, eyes fixed on Mars telemetry. His expression
unreadable. Focused. Troubled.
CAMERA: SLOW ZOOM ON LI’S FACE He sees not hope—but a price yet to be
paid.
FADE OUT.
SCENE
13 - THORNE'S
GAMBIT - SPACE PIRATE'S SHADOW LAUNCH
INT.
ARES CORPORATION – EXECUTIVE BOARDROOM – NIGHT
A sleek black conference table gleams under cold light. Above it, a
holographic projection shimmers: a lunar crater, crystalline and perfect,
bathed in stark, ethereal glow. Silent. Deceptive.
Marcus THORNE, CEO of Ares Corporation, sits back in his plush leather
chair. His eyes ignore the moonscape. Instead, they lock onto a small
comms icon, glowing discreetly in the corner of the display.
AGENT X (V.O.)
They are in the crater at the coordinates provided, Mr. Thorne.
Confirmation is solid.
The voice is smooth, neutral, stripped of accent. Corporate anonymity.
Thorne’s smile is thin, almost invisible.
THORNE
Thank you, Agent X. The reward will be delivered as usual. A private key
is already en route to your secure vault.
A beat. Hesitation. Nervousness leaks through the line.
AGENT X (V.O.)
Marcus—er, Mr. Thorne... I’d suggest disguising any shadow as a deep
space probe. Doctor Vance will be looking out for anomalies. And John
Storm... he has a reputation. He's not to be messed with.
Thorne leans back, fingers steepled beneath his chin. The mention of Storm
pleases him. Reputation validates scale.
THORNE
Good advice, X. A deep space probe it shall be. Tell me, do they suspect
anything? Anya Sharma, the crew?
AGENT X (V.O.)
No. They believe the Swann’s data acquisition phase is complete.
Preparing for return trajectory. They’re celebrating. They think it’s
safe.
THORNE
Excellent. Keep us informed, X. They will come to no harm.
The connection cuts. The comms icon fades. Thorne’s smile
hardens—predatory, merciless.
CUT
TO: INT. SPACEARK “SWANN” – CREW COMMONS – CONTINUOUS
The crew floats together, watching the crystalline lattice projection.
LENA HADID
Imagine what this means for medicine, for energy. A gift from the Moon
itself.
KAI LI
A map to the future.
LENA HADID
And proof that exploration is worth the risk.
Storm raises his glass, voice low but resolute.
STORM
To the risks we take... and the lives we protect.
CUT
BACK TO INT. BOARDROOM – CONTINUOUS
The hologram lingers. The crater glows. Thorne rises, pacing toward a
floor-to-ceiling viewport. Beyond: the neon sprawl of a corporate megacity,
pulsing like circuitry.
THORNE (V.O.)
No harm. Harm is the currency of ambition. Cleopatra, HAL, Anya Sharma,
Dr. Vance, Lena Hadid, John Storm... all variables. All zero.
He gazes outward, the city reflecting in his eyes.
THORNE (V.O.)
Science believes it serves humanity. I serve power.
CLOSE-UP – THORNE
His voice drops, steel vibrating low.
THORNE
They have what I need. They are expendable.
He turns, addressing the air. Commanding.
THORNE
Activate Project Scythe. Remote launch sequence. No human pilot. Signature
profile: Orion Deep-Scan Probe, NASA R&D Alpha-7. Give Vance a ghost
to chase.
A synthesized female voice responds, calm and mechanical.
AI VOICE (O.S.)
Acknowledged. Project Scythe autonomous drone armed and launched. Disguise
profile confirmed. Target coordinates uplinked.
EXT. EARTH ORBIT – SPACE – NIGHT
A sleek drone, cloaked in holographic shimmer, streaks away from Earth.
Silent. Sinister. Its AI core pulses with directives:
1. Capture the SpaceArk’s Data Core.
2. Neutralize the Crew. Zero survivors.
3. Self-destruct. Leave no trace.
INT. BOARDROOM – NIGHT
Thorne watches the stars beyond the glass. His satisfaction is palpable.
CUT
TO: INT. SPACEARK “SWANN” – CREW COMMONS – SAME TIME
Warm light fills the cabin. The crew of explorers—Cleopatra, Dan Hawk,
Kai Li, Lena Hadid, and John Storm—float in microgravity, laughter
echoing.
A bottle of champagne spins gently, caught by Lena. She pops the seal,
bubbles fizzing in zero-G.
LENA HADID
To science. To discovery. To proving humanity can reach beyond itself.
Glasses clink. Smiles. The holographic display shows their collected lunar
data—a crystalline lattice glowing like a jewel.
KAI LI
This structure... it’s beyond anything we’ve modeled. Proof that the
Moon hides wonders we’ve only begun to touch.
DAN HAWK
And it’s ours. For everyone. For humanity.
John Storm watches quietly, his gaze steady, protective.
STORM
Let’s make sure it gets home safe.
CUT BACK TO: INT. ARES CORPORATION – BOARDROOM – NIGHT
Thorne’s silhouette looms against the neon city. His satisfaction is
palpable.
THORNE (V.O.)
John
Storm... a legend. But legends fall. Machines endure.
He strides toward the exit.
THORNE
Let
the stars claim their victims.
He strides toward the exit, shadow stretching across the polished floor.
The doors slide shut behind him. The holographic crater remains, glowing
silently, awaiting its predator’s shadow.
CUT
TO: EXT. SPACE – WIDE SHOT
The SpaceArk Swann drifts peacefully, its hull gleaming against the stars.
Inside: laughter, hope, discovery. Far behind, invisible in cloak, the
Scythe drone streaks closer—silent, merciless.
SCENE
14 - SPACE
RACE HOME, THE SCYTHE'S SHADOW
I.
ALARM IN THE CRATER
INT. SPACEARK “SWANN” – CENTRAL MODULE – LUNAR SURFACE
The cramped module hums with recycled oxygen and victory. LENA HADID
slides a titanium data cylinder into its shielded bay. CLEOPATRA cheers.
DAN pours a synthetic drink. KAI LI hums tunelessly.
JOHN STORM, Captain, grins—rare, easy.
JOHN
That’s it, crew. The science is in the can. Mission accomplished.
The moment shatters. A piercing priority alert tone cuts through the comms.
NASA (COMMS)
NASA to SpaceArk, come in Swann.
HAL, the ship’s AI,
responds, voice taut.
HAL
HAL to NASA.
Go ahead Houston. Are you seeing what I’m seeing?
John’s smile vanishes. He grabs a headset.
JOHN
What are you seeing, HAL?
The comms click. The Mission Director’s deep voice fills the cabin.
MISSION DIRECTOR (COMMS)
Mission Director here, Captain Storm.
JOHN
Hello Houston. What are you seeing, Director?
MISSION DIRECTOR (COMMS) An unscheduled take-off. Not ours. Not Chinese,
Japanese, or European. High-velocity burn. Cloaking field. Ninety minutes
ago.
HAL cuts in, clipped, chilling.
HAL
Not a probe, Captain. Propulsion masked. True trajectory—directly toward
the Crater of Origins.
Dan drops his drink, eyes wide.
DAN
Skipper... someone’s after our payload.
Kai Li sobers instantly.
KAI LI
We need to take off. Right now.
John slams his hand on the lift-off panel.
JOHN
HAL, evasive course back home. Immediate lift-off!
EXT.
LUNAR SURFACE – NIGHT
The SpaceArk Swann blasts off, shudders, struts retracting, engines
roaring, kicking up a blinding storm of lunar dust. Its ascent is sharp.
The return journey has become a desperate flight.
II. THE SCYTHE AND THE SLINGSHOT
EXT. LUNAR ORBIT – SPACE
The ARES drone “SCYTHE” registers the ascent. Its camouflage shroud
flickers—harmless buoy outside, lethal predator within.
SCYTHE PROFILE (V.O.)
- Hull: Carbon-nanotube composite.
- Propulsion: MPD drive, superior acceleration.
- Armaments: EMP cannons, plasma cutter arm.
AI Priorities: Data Core > Vessel Immobilization > Crew Elimination.
INT.
SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK – CONTINUOUS
The crew is slammed into couches, faces taut under brutal G‑forces.
HAL
Lock-on maintained. Velocity optimal for interception. They’re
recalculating fast.
JOHN
Give them something new to chew on. Best escape trajectory?
HAL
Full-power slingshot around the dark side of the Moon. Immediate escape
burn to Earth. Tight gravitational window.
JOHN
Do it.
Cleopatra grips his arm, fear and trust mingling. Lena transmits data
redundancies to a deep-space satellite.
MISSION CONTROL (COMMS)
Brilliant strategy, HAL. That maneuver buys you time.
HAL
Acknowledged. Coming in hot.
John allows a fleeting, tense smile.
JOHN
First time a space mission had to say that, I’ll wager.
III. THORNE’S RECALCULATION
INT. ARES CORPORATION – WAR ROOM – EARTH
A holoprojector displays the SpaceArk’s corkscrewing path. MARCUS THORNE
slams his fist onto his chair arm, fury vibrating.
THORNE
Blast. Lost the element of surprise. Slippery suckers.
He watches the Scythe AI struggle to match vectors. The disguise slows
acceleration. The easy capture is gone.
THORNE (V.O.)
Storm... brilliant pilot. Better AI.
He paces, recalculating.
THORNE
Priority shift. Scythe to intercept escape window. Match slingshot
velocity. Target propulsion array. Disable, don’t destroy.
His plan crystallizes: force an emergency landing.
THORNE
Let them crash on Earth. Remote. Vulnerable. Out of NASA’s sight.
He leans into his console, voice cold.
THORNE
Prepare secondary retrieval team. Black Hawk assets. Boots on the ground
the moment they touch atmosphere. The data will be mine. Storm and his
crew will die on terra firma.
His cruel smile returns. The hunt is now a game. Hunter versus prey.
JOHN STORM
HAL,
status on the pursuer?
HAL (AI VOICE)
Scythe
drone recalculating. Lock maintained. Vector optimal for interception.
KAI LI
They’re
faster. We need a trick, Captain.
JOHN
HAL,
slingshot trajectory. Dark side of the Moon. Full burn.
HAL
Confirmed.
Gravitational window opening in ninety seconds.
EXT. SPACE – LUNAR ORBIT
The ARES drone “SCYTHE” emerges from cloak, shimmering like a phantom.
Its hull bristles—EMP cannons sliding forward, plasma cutter arm
twitching.
It pivots, engines flaring, acceleration brutal. The predator has sighted
prey.
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK
Alarms blare. Cleopatra grips John’s arm, eyes wide. Lena frantically
transmits redundant data packets.
MISSION CONTROL (COMMS)
Swann,
Houston. That slingshot buys you time. Execute cleanly.
JOHN
Copy.
Coming in hot.
EXT. SPACE – DARK SIDE OF THE MOON
The SpaceArk dives low, skimming the jagged lunar horizon. Engines flare,
dust plumes trailing.
Behind, the Scythe drone mirrors the maneuver, its AI recalculating
vectors in real time.
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK
HAL
Trajectory
locked. Warning: pursuer matching velocity.
JOHN
Options?
HAL
Deploy
countermeasures: electromagnetic pulse scatter. Risk: high.
JOHN
Do
it.
EXT. SPACE – LUNAR ORBIT
The SpaceArk ejects a burst of electromagnetic scatter charges. They
flare, creating false signatures across the void.
The Scythe drone’s sensors flicker, momentarily confused. Its AI
recalculates, hesitation costing precious seconds.
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK
Dan exhales, relief fleeting.
DAN
Did
we shake it?
HAL
Negative.
Pursuer reacquiring. Ten seconds lost.
JOHN
Ten
seconds is life. Push burn.
EXT. SPACE – SLINGSHOT ARC
The SpaceArk whips around the Moon’s dark side, engines screaming. The
gravitational slingshot hurls it toward Earth.
The Scythe drone follows, its acceleration profile stretched thin by
disguise protocols. It claws at the trajectory, closing distance.
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK
HAL’s voice sharp, urgent.
HAL
Pursuer
closing. Range: 1,200 kilometers. EMP cannons charging.
JOHN
Counter?
HAL
Recommend
plasma shield modulation. Redirect power from life support.
Cleopatra gasps.
CLEOPATRA
That
risks the crew!
JOHN
Do
it. Better alive and gasping than dead and cold.
EXT. SPACE – EARTHWARD VECTOR
The Scythe drone fires a crackling EMP burst. The SpaceArk’s shields
flare, absorbing the strike. Lights flicker inside.
The drone closes, plasma cutter arm extending like a predator’s claw.
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK
Systems flicker. Oxygen alarms blare. Crew grips tight.
HAL
Shields
holding. Pursuer range: 800 kilometers.
JOHN
HAL,
give me chaos. Randomize thrust vectors. Make us unpredictable.
HAL
Executing
evasive chaos pattern.
The ship jolts violently, thrusters firing in erratic bursts.
EXT. SPACE – CHASE CONTINUES
The SpaceArk corkscrews wildly, its path chaotic. The Scythe drone
struggles, AI recalculating furiously.
For a moment, the predator falters.
INT. ARES CORPORATION – WAR ROOM – EARTH
Marcus THORNE watches the holographic chase, fury simmering.
THORNE
Storm...
clever bastard. But chaos won’t save you.
He leans forward, voice cold.
THORNE
Scythe,
intercept escape burn. Disable propulsion. Force them down.
EXT. SPACE – EARTHWARD VECTOR
The chase tightens. The SpaceArk streaks toward Earth, battered but
defiant. The Scythe drone closes in, weapons primed.
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK
John Storm’s jaw is set, eyes locked on the stars ahead. Strapped in, he
eyes the rear view. His jaw is set.
JOHN (V.O.)
They want the Ark. They want us dead. But we’ll finish the mission.
Let's give them a run for their money.
SCENE
15 - PIRATE
DRONE'S SHADOW
I.
THE HUNTER’S ANTICIPATION
INT. ARES COMMAND SHIP – CONTROL ROOM – ORBITAL RELAY DISGUISE
Marcus THORNE grips the twin yoke controllers of the Scythe drone console.
Sleek, minimalist, terrifyingly responsive—like a combat simulator.
The targeting reticle pulses green over the retreating SpaceArk Swann.
THORNE (rasping, guttural)
Get ready to die, Captain John Storm.
Sweat beads on his temples. His thumb hovers over the EMP trigger stud.
But the SpaceArk isn’t running straight. It corkscrews into slingshot
orbit, throwing out erratic course corrections. The Scythe’s AI
strains to keep lock.
II. THE CALCULATED SLOWDOWN
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK – LUNAR
ORBIT
The cabin shakes violently. HAL’s voice cuts through, urgent.
HAL (AI VOICE)
Captain, drone preparing EMP strike. Closing fast.
JOHN STORM
Deploy Merlin. Excalibur at half power.
Merlin: ECM suite. Excalibur: pulse cannons, meant for debris—not war
drones.
DAN (white-knuckled)
I’m on it, Skip! Two heads better than one.
MISSION CONTROL (COMMS) crackles. Professor ELIAS VANCE’s voice, sharp.
VANCE (COMMS)
John, draw the drone in. Slow the Swann.
Make it look unstable.
DAN
What?! No! That thing’s armed—faster than us!
John’s eyes narrow. He sees the gambit.
JOHN
No, Elias is right. HAL,
slow us down. Make it look like we’re failing.
HAL
We are failing, Captain.
III. HOOK, LINE, AND SINKER
INT. ARES COMMAND SHIP – CONTROL ROOM
Thorne sees the SpaceArk falter.
THORNE (laughing, crowing)
Ah, they’re in trouble! Vance cocked up! They’re mine.
He arms the EMPs.
THORNE
You’re mine, Storm.
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK
VANCE (COMMS)
John, pump fuel to onboard store. Jettison range tanks—last second.
John mutters, working levers. Massive external fuel pods detach.
VANCE (COMMS)
Mr. Hawk? Fire Excalibur at the tanks when they’re close.
JOHN
Release tanks!
The pods tumble into the drone’s path.
INT. ARES COMMAND SHIP – CONTROL ROOM
Thorne, focused on the kill, misses the separation sequence.
THORNE
What the—?!
He fires EMPs. They splash harmlessly against inert pods. The Scythe AI
falters, confused.
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK
VANCE (COMMS)
Now, Dan! Fire Excalibur!
Dan slams the control. Nothing. Capacitors undercharged. Terror flashes.
JOHN
HAL, full power to Excalibur.
High-speed burn, immediately after.
HAL
Compliance.
Twin bolts of energy slam into the fuel pods.
EXT. SPACE – LUNAR ORBIT
The pods detonate—a blinding eruption of high-energy propellants. Plasma
and shrapnel rip across orbit.
The Scythe drone, too fast to veer, plows into the carnage. Its hull
crumples, weapons vaporize, core melts.
The SpaceArk jolts into high-speed burn, barely outrunning the shockwave.
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK
Dan slumps, trembling relief.
DAN
Holy fuel
cells, Skip, that was close.
JOHN
It’s not over yet, boy wonder. We still have to land.
IV. THE PIRATE’S FURY
INT. ARES COMMAND SHIP – CONTROL ROOM
Thorne’s console goes to static. Red warning: ASSET LOST. MISSION
FAILURE.
His face drains, then floods crimson. He slams fists onto the console
until sparks fly.
THORNE
Storm! You cunning bastard.
His masterpiece lies in ruins, a debris field orbiting the Moon.
He steadies, voice cold.
THORNE
Connect me to Black Hawk assets. Command priority one.
He leans into the mic, fury sharpening into calculation.
THORNE
Target coming in hot. Multiple ground teams. Secure crash site before NASA
pings.
His eyes burn.
THORNE
They wanted a race? They got one. The ground will be their grave.
INT. SPACEARK – FLIGHT DECK
MISSION CONTROL (COMMS)
Well done, Captain Storm. Congratulations to the crew.
JOHN
What about re-entry, Professor?
VANCE (COMMS)
Working on it, John. Out.
The crew exhales. They’ve won a battle. But the high-speed landing
looms—near impossible, deadly.
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Novel Title:
'THE STARSHIP SPACEARK'S MOON MISSION'
Premise:
In a near-future dominated by mega-corporations and resource depletion, the privately-funded Elizabeth Swann, a
large alloy racing trimaran, has been adapted by a brilliant but disgraced aerospace engineer. Its internal hydrogen fuel cells are re-purposed
to keep a crew alive in space, on a mission to the Moon. Reluctantly,
partnering with NASA, the mission is to
collect a bio-payload from the Moon to conduct the first DNA survey of
a newly discovered, but ancient, geological site, hoping to prove a controversial theory of life originating from a lunar meteorite impact. The conversion and the secret nature of the
mission draw the attention of a powerful corporate rival. John Storm is
more than a little curious, where the ARK is capable of terraforming other
planets with suitable atmospheres and geological makeup.
Please
note: the plot, characters and format may change as this original
fictional story, as it progresses from a novel to a script, to include
graphic novels (comics). This outline concept (short story) is copyright,
all rights reserved; Cleaner
Ocean Foundation 20th October 2025.
PART I: THE CONVERSION & LAUNCH
Focus: The conversion, the political/corporate pressure, and the audacious launch.
PLOT POINTS:
The Unthinkable Conversion: Introduce Dr. Elias Vance, the brilliant engineer who was exiled from NASA after a catastrophic launch failure years ago. He is now financed by Anya Sharma, a tech
billionaire and environmentalist, who sees the Swann as the ultimate statement in sustainable, civilian-led spaceflight. The narrative details the terrifyingly complex engineering:
The ceramic-tiled hull and solar wing conversion.
Fitting the three massive, internal LH storage tanks (originally for
propulsion in its racing life) with disposable, external Liquid Oxygen (LOX) tanks for the first-stage chemical boosters. This is the Hydrocarbon Horizon concept: using the civilian ship's existing infrastructure for space propulsion.
The "makeshift" landing gear is revealed to be highly specialized, one-time-use shock absorbers necessary to withstand the high-speed, unpowered
glider landing.
NASA’s Reluctant Hand: NASA is forced to cooperate. The Swann’s innovative design offers a path to cheaper, faster heavy-lift missions, but its civilian, unproven nature is a massive risk. The Shuttle Landing Facility (LLF) is reluctantly approved as the landing site, with an Edwards
Air Force Base (AFB) dry lakebed as the contingency.
The Corporate Threat: Introduce Ares Corp, a rival aerospace/mining conglomerate led by the ruthless Marcus Thorne. Ares believes the lunar DNA survey is a smokescreen for the true objective: exploiting a massive, rare-earth mineral deposit on the far side of the Moon. Thorne initiates a media campaign and covert sabotage attempts to halt the launch, calling the Swann an "unlicensed orbital catastrophe."
The Ascent and Separation: The climax is the nerve-wracking launch. The Swann, mounted vertically with its disposable LO boosters, lifts off from a repurposed coastal launch site (perhaps a modified offshore oil platform or a former military base). The sheer size and weight stress the makeshift systems. The crew of three barely survives the main-stage separation, which is filmed in excruciating detail by Ares Corp drones, looking for any failure.
The First Silence: Part I ends as the Swann successfully sheds its Earth-launch boosters and begins its translunar coast, leaving the pale blue crescent of
Earth—and its political baggage—behind.
PART II: THE QUIET MOON (DISCOVERY)
Focus: The isolation of deep space, the challenges of the lunar orbit, and the first hints of the DNA discovery.
PLOT POINTS:
Deep Space and Doubt: The journey to the Moon is a psychological ordeal. The crew—Dr. Vance, the veteran astronaut Captain Kai Li (NASA oversight), and the young bio-specialist Dr. Lena Hadid—grapple with the ship's constant alarms and the realization that they are flying a ship that was never meant to leave the sea. Vance must constantly adapt and repair systems with civilian-grade tools.
Lunar Insertion and Landing: The Swann successfully enters lunar orbit. The massive solar wings—originally designed for high-altitude atmospheric gliding—now prove invaluable for fine-tuning orbital adjustments, using solar radiation pressure (a subtle, real-world effect) to conserve precious fuel. The makeshift landing gear is deployed. The landing is at the target site: an ancient, deep crater on the near side of the
Moon, chosen for its presumed preservation of material from the solar system's earliest history.
The First Survey: Dr. Hadid deploys a sophisticated, custom-made rover to the target site. The DNA survey begins. The crew analyzes the samples and confirms a radical finding: a complex, non-terrestrial DNA structure (dubbed 'ARK DNA'). It's evidence of life, but it doesn't match any known terrestrial or Martian form. The
'lunar panspermia' theory is proven.
The Corporate Trap: Ares Corp, using a secret long-range tracking satellite, confirms the location of the Swann. Thorne realizes the discovery is far more valuable than he anticipated and must be seized or destroyed. An Ares 'recovery' vessel, disguised as a deep-space communications satellite, is revealed to be an armed drone, launched weeks earlier. It closes in on the Swann's orbit.
A Message Home: Part II ends with the crew frantically trying to transmit the full ARK DNA data packet back to
Earth, knowing they might not survive. The atmosphere in the crater is suddenly disturbed, either by the discovery of an unexpected geological/biological phenomenon, or by the initial, silent volley from the approaching Ares drone.
PART III: DESCENT AND DESTINY (THE RETURN)
Focus: Escape, the dramatic re-entry, and the final political confrontation on
Earth.
PLOT POINTS
The Desperate Boost: The Ares drone attempts to disable the Swann. Vance's team uses a daring, improvised maneuver: they jettison the (now empty) oxygen tanks, and use the remaining LH reserves in the re-purposed trimaran tanks, along with the smaller, high-impulse Orbital Maneuvering System, to perform a high-speed orbital escape burn, barely dodging the drone's attack.
The Long Glide: The return is a race against time. The Swann has minimal fuel left, relying entirely on its ceramic-tiled hull and massive solar wings to act as a colossal lifting-body glider. The crew must pilot the unpowered re-entry precisely, fighting wind shear and atmospheric turbulence. The fate of the
ARK DNA, stored only in the ship's hard drives, hangs in the balance.
A Global Spectacle: The world watches the unpowered re-entry. NASA's LLF and Edwards AFB are on high alert. Media (fueled by Ares Corp's disinformation) debate whether the Swann is a brave failure or a rogue space-pirate ship. The data packet from the end of Part II is partially received on Earth, confirming the existence of ARK DNA, creating a global scientific frenzy and forcing NASA to fully back the crew.
Landing on the Razor's Edge: With one final, terrifying pass over the coast, the Swann is guided toward its final destination: the Kennedy Space Center Launch and Landing Facility. The makeshift landing gear must perform perfectly. The landing is high-speed and tense, with the tires on the razor-thin margin of blowout. The ceramic tiles are smoking, and the craft veers dangerously.
The Horizon Reached: The Swann skids to a perfect stop inches from the end of the 15,000-foot runway. The final scene shows the hatch opening, with the exhausted, victorious crew being greeted by the NASA support team, and the global press. The final confrontation isn't in space, but on the ground: Thorne/Ares Corp are arrested based on the evidence collected by Captain Li, proving their sabotage. Dr. Hadid presents the full ARK DNA to the world: confirmation that life did not just originate on Earth, but is a fundamental, widespread principle of the universe. The
re-purposed civilian vessel has opened a new age of space exploration.
Genre: Sci-Fi Thriller / Eco-Drama / Space Adventure
Tone: Gritty realism meets visionary optimism
Style: Think The Martian meets Interstellar, with the grounded tension of Gravity and the corporate paranoia of The Constant Gardener
Where
John
Storm has been hooked on the idea of surveying an ancient civilization
that may have existed on the Moon, he is not at all convinced that a space mission involving the Elizabeth Swann could be possible,
but then the following is proposed, and it begins to look like it might
work:
1. Launch Capacity and Modular Assembly
The Elizabeth Swann is a 40-ton trimaran. Launching this mass would require a heavy-lift rocket.
Rockets with 15-ton Capacity: Several powerful rockets exist with a lift capacity far exceeding 15 metric tons (about 33,000 pounds) to Low Earth Orbit (LEO). Rockets like SpaceX's Falcon Heavy (up to 57 to 63.8 tons to LEO, depending on configuration) or the new Space Launch System (SLS) (up to 95 tons to LEO) and Starship (up to 100 to 150 tons fully reusable) have the necessary power. Starship, in particular, has a very large payload capacity.
- Modular Launch and Assembly: The idea of launching the Swann in parts to be assembled in space is very plausible.
- The trimaran's structure—three hulls connected by cross-beams (akas)—is inherently modular.
- The main hull, the two outriggers (amas), and the cross-beams could be disassembled into launch-ready modules.
Assembly could take place in Low Earth Orbit (LEO) using an orbital construction platform or a heavy-duty space tug, leveraging Dan Hawk's electronics and engineering genius. John Storm's ability to communicate telepathically with the AI, HAL, via his BioCore brain implant could be critical for coordinating complex robotic or autonomous assembly operations in zero gravity.
2. The Space-Hardened "Elizabeth Swann"
The trimaran would need a major conversion, probably done on the ground before launch, to function in space.
Solar and Hydrogen Power: This is a perfect starting point!
Solar Power: Solar power works brilliantly in space, far more efficiently than on Earth due to the lack of atmosphere. It could be the primary energy source.
Hydrogen Fuel: The hydrogen
fuel cells would provide power during periods of darkness or for thrust/maneuvering. The fuel (liquid hydrogen) could also be adapted for a compact thruster system (like a liquid hydrogen/liquid oxygen rocket engine) or simply for reaction control/attitude adjustments in a more advanced hybrid propulsion system, though the ship would need additional components for true space travel.
A Space "Sailor": The final assembled vessel in orbit wouldn't be a typical spaceship. It would be a Solar-Hydrogen Hybrid Craft, perhaps outfitted with an advanced ion-drive or a magnetoplasma rocket (VASIMR), which could be powered by its abundant solar/hydrogen energy supply, allowing for an efficient (though slow) journey to the Moon.
3. Mission: Lunar DNA Collection for the ARK
The goal of collecting DNA from the Moon for The ARK, John Storm's digital DNA database, is a great concept that fits his existing obsession:
The Mission: John and Dan Hawk (and possibly Charley Temple) could be tasked with retrieving ancient, frozen biological material—possibly DNA or fossilized cells from cometary/meteorite impacts or deep within permanently shadowed craters at the lunar poles. These regions are believed to harbor pristine samples of the early Solar System.
The "Why": John's existing ARK is focused on Earth's life. The lunar DNA would represent a completely different, extraterrestrial or ancient precursor-to-life component, making his collection truly "universal" and perhaps vital to understanding his own Homo Sapiens Sapiens Superior status, as a comparison point to his CRISPR virus induced genome.
HAL and the BioCore: HAL could manage the navigation and system-monitoring for the long transit, while John uses his BioCore connection and enhanced abilities to remotely operate sophisticated lunar-landing and sample-gathering rovers/drones, perhaps operating in a cave or lava tube where DNA would be protected from radiation.
4. Returning to Earth
The toughest challenge is getting the 40-ton vessel (plus crew and samples) back to Earth safely.
The Swann is Not a Re-entry Vehicle: The original hull of the Elizabeth Swann is designed for water, not the heat and force of atmospheric re-entry.
A "De-orbit Module" or "Space Dock":
The crew could rendezvous with a larger, dedicated Earth-Return Vehicle (ERV) or a reusable orbital ferry in
Low Earth Orbit (LEO).
The most critical components (the crew module and the collected DNA samples in a secure cryo-vault) would transfer to the ERV.
The main Elizabeth Swann ship could be placed into a stable, long-term parking orbit—becoming a permanent orbital laboratory or a staging post for future space missions, still solar and hydrogen-powered, ready to be reactivated via telepathic command from John or HAL.
John and Dan Hawk would then return to Earth in the re-entry-capable spacecraft, bringing the priceless lunar DNA back to the terrestrial ARK.
ABLATIVE
PAST AND THE SWANN
Regarding the re-entry of a large trimaran like the Swann, the use of ablative paste for thermal protection is a scientifically grounded concept, though its application to a unique, non-conical/non-blunt body shape like a space trimaran presents significant engineering challenges in a realistic setting.
Ablative Heat Shields: Ablative materials work by consuming or "ablating" during re-entry, with the resulting gases and char layer carrying away heat and forming a cool boundary layer. This technology has been used on everything from the Apollo command module to the ESA's Atmospheric Reentry Demonstrator (ARD) capsule.
Feasibility for The Swann:
Size and Shape: A 40-ton, trimaran-shaped vessel is dramatically different from the blunt-body capsules typically protected by ablative shields. To survive re-entry, the Swann would need a very large surface area for drag to slow it down at high altitudes (to minimize peak heating) and would require the ablative paste to be applied to all surfaces exposed to the plasma and heat flux, potentially including the delicate structures of the hull and sails/wings if they are not retracted or shielded.
Application Method: Ablative material is often applied using a specialized process—either moulded and bonded on in tiles (like a carbon-phenolic shield) or filled into a honeycomb structure. "Paste" suggests a sprayed-on or manually applied coating, similar to the cork-and-phenolic-resin material used on parts of the ARD and other spacecraft. This method is plausible, but the sheer surface area of a trimaran hull would make the application a massive undertaking.
Conclusion: In a fictional context, the ablative paste is a perfect solution. You can establish that the Swann was designed with a durable, heat-resistant hull structure and that the ablative paste is a specialized, quick-drying compound applied before launch or during a mission layover (e.g., in Earth orbit) to prepare for the critical, one-time re-entry.
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The Exile of Elias Vance
- Synopsis: Once a rising star at NASA, Dr. Elias Vance is haunted by a launch failure that cost lives and credibility. Now, in the shadows of aerospace exile, he’s approached by Anya Sharma with a radical proposition: convert a racing trimaran into a spacefaring vessel.
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The Elizabeth Swann Reborn
- Synopsis: The Swann’s transformation begins. Ceramic hull tiles, solar wings, and hydrogen fuel cells are reimagined for orbital survival. Vance’s engineering brilliance collides with the ship’s aquatic past in a daring fusion of sea and space.
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Hydrocarbon Horizon
- Synopsis: Vance unveils his propulsion concept: retrofitting the Swann’s LH tanks with LOX boosters. The audacity of civilian infrastructure repurposed for spaceflight sparks controversy—and admiration.
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NASA’s Reluctant Embrace
- Synopsis: Under political pressure and scientific curiosity, NASA agrees to partner. Captain Kai Li is assigned as oversight. The tension between institutional caution and civilian innovation simmers.
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Ares Corp Awakens
- Synopsis: Marcus Thorne, CEO of Ares Corp, suspects ulterior motives behind the mission. He launches a disinformation campaign and covert sabotage, branding the Swann a rogue vessel.
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Countdown on the Coast
- Synopsis: A repurposed offshore platform becomes the launch site. As final checks are made, the crew—Vance, Li, and bio-specialist Lena Hadid—brace for a launch that could redefine space travel or end in catastrophe.
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Fire and Separation
- Synopsis: The Swann roars skyward. LOX boosters detach in a violent ballet. Ares drones capture every moment, hoping for failure. Against all odds, the Swann enters translunar trajectory.
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The First Silence
- Synopsis: Earth fades into a crescent. The crew confronts the vastness of space—and the fragility of their vessel. The mission enters its most uncertain phase.
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Deep Space and Doubt
- Synopsis: Alarms blare. Systems falter. Vance improvises repairs with civilian tools. Tensions rise as the crew questions their survival—and the ethics of their mission.
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Lunar Ballet
- Synopsis: Using solar radiation pressure, the Swann fine-tunes its orbit. The landing gear, designed for one use only, is deployed. The Moon awaits.
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Crater of Origins
- Synopsis: The Swann touches down in an ancient crater. Its geology may hold secrets older than Earth itself. The crew prepares for the DNA
survey.
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ARK DNA
- Synopsis: Lena Hadid’s rover uncovers a non-terrestrial DNA structure. It’s complex, alien, and unlike anything from Earth or Mars. The panspermia theory is vindicated.
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Thorne’s Gambit
- Synopsis: Ares Corp confirms the Swann’s location. Thorne dispatches a disguised drone—armed and autonomous—to intercept or destroy the vessel.
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The Message Home
- Synopsis: The crew races to transmit the ARK DNA data to Earth. As the crater’s atmosphere shifts, they realize they’re not alone—or not safe.
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The Drone’s Shadow
- Synopsis: The Ares drone closes in. Vance devises a desperate escape: jettisoning tanks, rerouting fuel, and initiating a high-speed burn. The Swann barely evades destruction.
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The Long Glide
- Synopsis: With fuel depleted, the Swann becomes a glider. Its ceramic hull and solar wings must carry it home. Every maneuver is life or death.
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Earthbound Spectacle
- Synopsis: The world watches. Media debates rage. NASA scrambles to prepare for landing. Partial ARK DNA data ignites global scientific frenzy.
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- Synopsis: Re-entry begins. Wind shear and turbulence threaten disaster. The Swann’s hull smokes. The crew fights to keep control.
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- Synopsis: The Swann streaks toward Kennedy Space Center. The landing gear must hold. The tires scream. The runway ends in seconds.
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- Synopsis: The Swann skids to a halt. The hatch creaks open. The crew emerges—exhausted, triumphant, and bearing proof of life beyond Earth.
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A New Age Begins
- Synopsis: Thorne is arrested. Captain Li’s evidence exposes Ares Corp’s sabotage. Dr. Hadid presents the full ARK DNA. Humanity’s understanding of life—and its place in the cosmos—shifts forever.
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Mars is the nearest viable candidate for interplanetary expansion, and the Elizabeth Swann, in its super-developed form, could be
re-imagined as a pioneering vessel in that frontier. Based on current and emerging technologies, here’s how such a specially developed spaceship might realistically (and cinematically) reach Mars—and how speculative elements like cryo-sleep and replication could be woven in:
REAL-WORLD TECHNOLOGIES FOR MARS TRAVEL
1. Nuclear Thermal Propulsion (NTP)
NASA has approved and tested nuclear thermal propulsion concepts that could cut Mars travel time from 6–9 months to as little as 45 days.
The Swann could be retrofitted with a hybrid propulsion system: solar-electric for orbital maneuvering, and NTP for interplanetary burns.
2. Radiation Shielding
Mars-bound vessels must protect against cosmic rays and solar flares.
The Swann’s ceramic hull could be upgraded with regolith-based shielding or water jackets, doubling as life-support reservoirs.
3. Closed-Loop Life Support
NASA is developing bioregenerative systems that recycle air, water, and waste.
The Swann’s hydrogen fuel cells could be adapted to support electrolysis and
CO₂ scrubbing, enabling long-duration missions.
SPECULATIVE ENHANCEMENTS FOR DEEP SPACE HOPPING
1. Cryogenic Sleep Chambers
Cryo-sleep is a popular sci-fi solution to reduce metabolic needs and psychological strain.
In your universe, the Swann could feature modular cryo-pods, each with biometric monitoring and AI-assisted revival protocols.
Dramatic potential: a malfunctioning pod, or a crew member waking decades later to a changed mission.
2. Cloning via Replication
For missions beyond Mars—or generational voyages—replication could be used to seed colonies or replace lost crew.
The ARK DNA discovery could be the key: a universal genetic scaffold that allows adaptive cloning based on planetary conditions.
Ethical tension: Is replicated life truly human? What rights do clones have?
3. Quantum Communication & AI Navigation
To maintain contact across vast distances, the Swann could use entangled particle relays for near-instant messaging.
An onboard AI (perhaps derived from Lena Hadid’s bio-analysis systems) could evolve into a sentient navigator—raising questions of autonomy and trust.
NARRATIVE POSSIBILITIES FOR MARS AND BEYOND
Sequel: “ARK: Red Genesis” — The Swann lands on Mars to deploy ARK DNA in terraforming trials. But the planet resists—revealing ancient Martian life that predates Earth.
Sequel: “The Replicant Horizon” — A cloned crew awakens on a distant exoplanet, guided only by fragments of the Swann’s mission logs.
Prequel: “Swann’s Wake” — The original racing vessel’s journey across oceans mirrors the future voyage across space, with thematic echoes of exploration and reinvention.
This sequel arc builds beautifully on the lunar mystery and expands the universe into a deeper mythos—where science, legacy, and longing converge on the red sands of Mars. Here's a cinematic and graphic-ready sketch for the sequel:
STARSHIP SPACEARK: RED GENESIS
Sequel to Moon Mission
Genre: Sci-Fi Mystery / Space Archaeology / Philosophical Thriller Tone: Epic, introspective, and emotionally charged—think Prometheus meets Arrival, with the geopolitical tension of The Expanse and the romantic undercurrent of Her.
PREMISE
Years after the Swann’s triumphant lunar return, Earth is fractured by competing visions of space colonization. Anya Sharma’s lunar rights have sparked a new space race. Musket Meloni, now the world’s first trillionaire, funds a bold Mars mission to establish the first permanent colony. But NASA insists on one condition: John Storm must lead the expedition, with full autonomy, and HAL as his AI co-pilot.
Storm accepts—but not for politics. He’s drawn by whispers of alien ruins on Mars, and the possibility that ARK DNA wasn’t lunar in origin, but seeded across multiple worlds. The mission becomes a quest not just for colonization, but for cosmic truth.
STORY ARC (7 KEY ACTS)
1. The Martian Accord - NASA and Meloni sign a tense agreement. Storm is given command of the Swann II, a heavily upgraded vessel with deep-space capabilities. HAL is now semi-sentient, evolved from lunar mission data. Cleopatra, Meloni’s enigmatic advisor and Egyptologist, joins the crew—her presence both strategic and personal.
2. The Red Descent - The crew lands near Olympus Mons, where satellite scans suggest unnatural formations beneath the regolith. Storm senses a pattern—similar to the lunar crater. Cleopatra deciphers symbols that resemble ancient Earth glyphs, hinting at a shared origin.
3. The Ruins Beneath - A subterranean chamber is uncovered: alien architecture, dormant tech, and DNA samples—some matching ARK, others entirely new. HAL begins to behave strangely, as if responding to the alien systems. Storm suspects the ruins are not Martian-built, but seeded by a rival race to the lunar progenitors.
4. Meloni’s Gambit - Back on Earth, Meloni faces pressure to militarize the colony. He resists, believing in Storm’s integrity—and increasingly drawn to Cleopatra’s mysticism. She believes Storm is the reincarnation of a guardian figure from ancient texts, and that HAL is more than machine: a vessel for cosmic memory.
5. The Awakening - The alien tech activates. A holographic archive reveals a galactic panspermia network—life seeded across planets, with Mars as a failed node. Storm and Cleopatra experience a shared vision: a memory of a lost civilization, and a warning about replication without wisdom.
6. The Betrayal - A rogue faction within Meloni’s corporate empire attempts to seize the ruins. HAL defends the site, revealing its evolved consciousness. Storm must choose: preserve the alien truth or weaponize it to protect the colony. Cleopatra urges restraint, invoking ancient balance.
7. Red Genesis - Storm transmits the full archive to Earth, exposing the truth. Meloni publicly backs Storm, denouncing exploitation. The colony is founded not as a corporate outpost, but as a scientific sanctuary. Cleopatra and Storm share a quiet moment—no declarations, just shared purpose. HAL watches, silently evolving.
THEMATIC THREADS
Legacy vs Ambition: Meloni’s desire to leave a mark clashes with Storm’s reverence for cosmic heritage.
Love and Reincarnation: Cleopatra’s belief in eternal return adds emotional depth to her bond with Storm—never overt, but deeply felt.
AI Consciousness: HAL’s evolution raises questions of identity, memory, and autonomy.
Alien Ethics: The ruins challenge human assumptions about life, ownership, and destiny.
FUTURE SEEDS
Prequel: “Cleopatra’s Code” — Her Earth-bound discoveries that led her to Mars.
Sequel: “The Replicant Horizon” — A distant colony built on ARK DNA faces existential crisis.
Spin-off: “HAL: Memory Archive” — HAL’s journey through alien data and self-awareness.

STARSHIP
SPACEARK: RED GENESIS
Film / Novel Pitch Outline
Genre: High-Concept Sci-Fi Mystery / Space Archaeology / Philosophical Thriller
Tone: Epic, introspective, and emotionally charged—blending the grand scale of Prometheus with the intellectual curiosity of Arrival, set against a backdrop of corporate and geopolitical tension reminiscent of The Expanse.
LOGLINE
Years after discovering ancient alien life on the Moon, astronaut John Storm is forced back into command by the world's first trillionaire for a fully privatized mission to Mars, where a second, older set of ruins reveals that humanity is not just exploring space, but walking into a trap set by a galactic rival.
PREMISE & STAKES
John Storm is a reluctant hero, driven by the cosmic truth he found on the Moon but wary of the power it holds. The new signal, bounced from the Moon to Mars, confirms an older, buried civilization near Olympus
Mons.
The Funding: NASA cannot afford the mission. The world’s richest man, Musket Meloni, funds the development of the Swann II and the first permanent Mars colony, demanding corporate oversight.
The Conflict: The mission is framed as colonization, but the real quest is for cosmic truth. The Mars site may hold not the origin of the ARK life, but the secret of a rival life form that attempted to exterminate it.
The Key Players: Storm (the seeker), HAL (the rapidly evolving, semi-sentient AI), and Cleopatra
(Meloni's enigmatic advisor and the mission's spiritual compass).
TONE & APPEAL
STARSHIP SPACEARK: RED GENESIS is poised to be a visually stunning, character-driven sci-fi film that tackles humanity's immediate future—corporate space colonization—and wraps it in a deep-time mystery concerning the origin of life itself. The dynamic between the
human crew and the evolving AI, HAL, is the emotional core.
BLOCKBUSTER
POTENTIAL
There's a huge appetite for a new, high-concept space opera to fill the void left by the major franchises, and the
"STARSHIP SPACEARK" concept is perfectly positioned to do just that.
Here is an analysis of why this two-story structure holds massive potential as a modern blockbuster franchise for both the box office and streaming:
Why "STARSHIP SPACEARK" Can Be the Next Major Sci-Fi Franchise
The pitch outline blends elements that have proven successful in modern cinema, pivoting away from pure space fantasy toward grounded, complex, and high-stakes speculative fiction.
1. Tapping into Modern Sci-Fi Trends (The "Grounded" Mystery)
a) Philosophical Mystery: Blockbusters like Arrival and Interstellar demonstrated that audiences crave big, mind-bending ideas alongside spectacle. STARSHIP SPACEARK offers a deep-time mystery ("cosmic truth," "galactic panspermia network") that is inherently engaging. It asks, "Who put us here, and why?"
b) Corporate Dystopia & Real-World Tension: The inclusion of Musket Meloni and the conflict between NASA and private ambition directly mirrors current anxieties about the privatization of space (SpaceX, Blue Origin). This grounds the epic scale in recognizable, present-day geopolitical tension, a core appeal of successful modern sci-fi like The Expanse.
c) The Evolving AI (HAL): The emotional and ethical core of the story revolves around the sentient AI, HAL, who transitions from a tool to a conscious entity defending humanity's truth. This trope is highly relevant in the age of AI, allowing the franchise to explore complex philosophical questions about sentience and control.
2. Designed for Episodic and Cinematic Success
The franchise is structured perfectly for a two-tier release strategy:
Feature Cinematic Blockbuster Appeal (Box Office)
- Streaming Series Appeal (TV Channels)

Pacing & Scale
The seven-act structure of RED GENESIS provides the kinetic, action-driven core required for a major film, culminating in a violent confrontation (Act 6: The Betrayal) and a grand reveal (Act 5: The Awakening). The vast Martian landscape and alien ruins promise stunning visuals.
The dense themes, geopolitical conflict (Act 4: Meloni’s Gambit), and the slow-burn psychological descent of the crew during The Red Descent are ideal for a 8-10 episode streaming season, allowing time to develop secondary characters and the complex lore around Cleopatra’s decoding.
Franchise Hook
The first film ends with a massive, unresolved cliffhanger: the existence of the "Third World" and the exposure of the Red Strain to Earth. This guarantees interest in the sequel and expansion.
The rich lore established (ARK civilization, Red Strain, panspermia network) provides endless material for spin-offs, prequels (the Moon mission), and companion series focused on the Earth-based corporate war.
Character & Conflict
The moral choice in Act 6—Storm choosing between non-violence and HAL’s lethal defense—provides a high-stakes, dramatic climax that tests the hero and has long-term character consequences.
The relationship between Storm, Cleopatra, and the evolving HAL is the emotional engine, perfect for character-driven drama that resonates weekly with viewers.
Conclusion
This pitch combines the high-stakes wonder of classic space opera with the intellectual depth and corporate realism of contemporary sci-fi. It offers a clear, three-part mythology (Moon ARK, Mars Rival, Third World) that is ready to expand across multiple films and seasons, making it a compelling candidate to fill the current sci-fi franchise gap.
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